Wow this was one delicious fic! Smut was exceptially good and with great variety and eroticism. Often too much sex gets boring, but not here, never here because of how well written it was. I could read more add more of these chapters.

Are you ever gonna update

Ok that is HOT

I love the sexual scene. Lily is gorgeous!

more chapters? or i'll be so sad *cry cry cry* PLEASE?

Maybe I'll try again. ALERT! ALERT! GROSSEST STORY EVER IS IN THIS REVIEW!

Chapter 4

She's lying eagle-spread on my bed, completely naked. I'm naked too, my mouth hovering above her gorgeous pussy. It's cleanly shaven, dripping with pre-cum. It looks so tasty. I can't hold it in anymore...

My mouth is around her pussy, sucking and licking and moaning. She's gasping, gripping the bed sheets tightly, her thighs tensing.

"Amy..." she gasps, now gripping at my ass. "Keep on going... please..."

Now she's pumping her fingers in and out if my ass, licking her lips hungrily. Then she grabs my pussy and shoves two fingers up my hole. I scream, telling her to keep on going, that it felt so good...

Then I stuck my tongue up her hole, licking for all I was worth. Her juices squirted all over my face, into my mouth, so that I could drink the sweet salty taste hungrily.

Now her mouth is around my pussy, sucking and licking inside my hole. It's my turn to squirt all over her now. Then I flip over and place my lips over hers, licking her bottom lip, seeking entrance into her mouth. She granted it immediately, then stuck her tongue down my throat before making her way down my neck, down to my breasts.

I put my hand onto her pussy, asking permission for me to play with her delicate nipples first. She let me, moaning with delight as my tongue drew circles around her nipples. "Amy..." she whispered, putting her hand on my ass. "Please..."

I knead her free breast with my hand, nibbling her nipple inside my mouth. Zoë moaned loudly, her whole body trembling. "Please, Amy, please..."

I grabbed her pussy, then slid down to kiss it. Open-mouthed, lingering kisses. Then I get up and let my eyes wander over her gorgeous naked glory. Zoë the sex goddess. She was one, too. Her perfectly shaped ass was tanned and smooth, and her breasts gleamed with my saliva. Then I looked at her pussy, smiling. Zoë was looking at my pussy too. And licking her lips. Then she said: "Please, Amy, let me feel you..."

Of course I let her. Her hands roamed over my body, squeezing my ass cheeks gently and teasing my pussy. Them she cupped my breasts and licked them like crazy. "Zoë, let me feel your teeth..." I moaned, grabbing her ass. She nibbled my nipped gently, then made her way down to my pussy. She put her whole mouth around it and traced circles with her tongue. She gently poked her foot into my ass hole, and I spilled all I had into her. She swallowed it all, then she poured herself into my hole. I tangled my hands into her hair, then did the same to her.

I did warn you!

ENOUGH! That is DISGUSTING! SEX! I ask you! How about this?

Chapter 4

She's lying eagle-spread on my bed, completely naked. I'm naked too, my mouth hovering above her gorgeous pussy. It's cleanly shaven, dripping with pre-cum. It looks so tasty. I can't hold it in anymore...

My mouth is around her pussy, sucking and licking and moaning. She's gasping, gripping the bed sheets tightly, her thighs tensing.

"Amy..." she gasps, now gripping at my ass. "Keep on going... please..."

Now she's pumping her fingers in and out if my ass, licking her lips hungrily. Then she grabs my pussy and shoves two fingers up my hole. I scream, telling her to keep on going, that it felt so good...

Then I stuck my tongue up her hole, licking for all I was worth. Her juices squirted all over my face, into my mouth, so that I could drink the sweet salty taste hungrily.

Now her mouth is around my pussy, sucking and licking inside my hole. It's my turn to squirt all over her now. Then I flip over and place my lips over hers, licking her bottom lip, seeking entrance into her mouth. She granted it immediately, then stuck her tongue down my throat before making her way down my neck, down to my breasts.

I put my hand onto her pussy, asking permission for me to play with her delicate nipples first. She let me, moaning with delight as my tongue drew circles around her nipples. "Amy..." she whispered, putting her hand on my ass. "Please..."

I knead her free breast with my hand, nibbling her nipple inside my mouth. Zoë moaned loudly, her whole body trembling. "Please, Amy, please..."

I grabbed her pussy, then slid down to kiss it. Open-mouthed, lingering kisses. Then I get up and let my eyes wander over her gorgeous naked glory. Zoë the sex goddess. She was one, too. Her perfectly shaped ass was tanned and smooth, and her breasts gleamed with my saliva. Then I looked at her pussy, smiling. Zoë was looking at my pussy too. And licking her lips. Then she said: "Please, Amy, let me feel you..."

Of course I let her. Her hands roamed over my body, squeezing my ass cheeks gently and teasing my pussy. Them she cupped my breasts and licked them like crazy. "Zoë, let me feel your teeth..." I moaned, grabbing her ass. She nibbled my nipped gently, then made her way down to my pussy. She put her whole mouth around it and traced circles with her tongue. She gently poked her foot into my ass hole, and I spilled all I had into her. She swallowed it all, then she poured herself into my hole. I tangled my hands into her hair, then did the same to her.

Chapter 7
Ewwwww Can you put speech marks please?

very steamy

Smut. Pure smut. Mind you, it's interesting smut though.

Sexy fanfic!

WOW! There was some creative sex in the story! Absolutely LOVE IT :)

it would be really hot if sirius walked in on them

and there was a threesome?

or maybe he just watched and wanked...lol

honestly this story was good and well written but just a tad too much sex. because i now could copy your writing style if i wished. keep us wanting it but pulling it away at the same time, flirt with the story

i really liked ur story, very good