Hey there! You told me to review your story, so here I am...reviewing. It's pretty good; some gramatical bits and other such things I'd fix, and maybe spruce up a little dialogue?

But it's fun, and the people are in character. Good job!

Great story. I have a question though, do you want/would you like to use reviewer's madeup Nobodies for this little Organization that's forming here? I, for one, would love to take a part in the story, no matter how small, and even though you'd be controlling the character once made. Like I said, great story, nice to see Halo getting some KH love, even if it's XBOX.

Ooh neat XD LOL so much fun, great chapter! What's up next?

PURPLE? That's a gay color. OMG PLZ UPDATE! XD

ps WHEN DO WE GET TO SEE TEH BUMERNNG/?

dun duN DUN! O NOES WHAT NEXT?

AXEL! o I luff him!

Gret job so far, it gets better and better, nya~!

OOH! Great chapter! You write fantastic fight scenes XD Cant wait to see what happens next!

O NOES NOT HALO! WUT WIL HAPN? OMG PLZ UPD8!

OMG PLZ UPD8! PLZ RIT MOR!

Other than you getting my hair and eyes backwards (I know you were too busy looking at Lacey to notice but c'mon!) THIS IS FANTASTIC.

SO MUCH LOVE. I hate you.