Reviews for Partners |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is there more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! I have no critique, just awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! Update! Update! I wonder if they finally cave into their feelings. Its getting good! Update! Update! Update! PLEASE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going. This one is good. Can't wait for chapter 6! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story! No locked bathroom doors. Sounds like a plan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() finish its good its getting coolio |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens in the bathroom tonight! Please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! I am glad they are going to spend more time together and am really happy that they are going to get together. Good job with this chapter and him hearing her in the shower was a great idea, the sexual tension is excellent. Good job, keep writing, Jaed |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA HA! Great update! The tension could be felt everywhere! I cannot wait until the next update! EO! onetreefan |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! they have ot get otgether its so god! please finish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO! YIKES! Great update as always! Please more soon... EO! onetreefan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great little chapter, so alluring for just two paragraphs and so full of desire. I can't wait for the next one, you have built this up well, the tension between them is awesome and so thick. Great job, keep writing. Jaed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, but she isn't going to be able to stop thinking about him, for her it's like breathing. Good writing as far as keeping them in charater, I just love these two together so i hope they find their way. Looking forward to the next chapter, good job, keep writing. Jaed |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats was good finish please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO! HA HA... HAVE TO LOVE THE MIXED SIGNALS... Well, I cannot wait for more. You are awesome. onetreefan |