Now Dr Light can become a fertility doctor.

You know I love where this is going, but when will this end? I keep on having to have breaks after every like, 5 to 6 pages. Please. Tell me this isn’t a huge chapter book in real life!

I LOVE WHERE THIS IS GOING YOU ARE THE COOLEST WRITER EVER. I LOVE TEEN TITANS AND RAVEN, SO THIS IS AMAZINGLY COOL!

Awwwwwwww!

I mean I thought they were dating already, but awwwwww

TWINSIES!

OMG this is one of the best stories I have EVER and I mean EVER read in my time of fanfiction, please can you do a fanfic on raven getting her period after Joaquin and Delilah are born thx!

Good overall story. A few problems: Dr. Light is afraid of Raven and probably won't get within 5 feet of her and there's no way Cyborg would be the one to take him out, at one point we see Raven talking to God when she probably refer to Azar (although good job on using Azar the rest of the time), Raven would most likely be able to access her and empathetic abilities even if she lost the rest for Powers, there's no way the team will let Raven sit out on a mission and she would probably still join them along with Starfire, along with a few character inconsistencies and unrealistic scenes. But, for the most part it's surprisingly realistic to the series/comic books. I would definitely read a part two. Good job overall!

The story is pretty accurate, with personalities, actions etc. Good use of references to the series. Although, Dr. Light is afraid of Raven and probably wouldn't get within 10 feet of her, and there's no way cyborg would be the one to take him out. At one point Raven talks about God, although she would really talk to Azar, which is God to her. (But good job on using "Azar" every other time.) Some of the story is funny, good overall feel and good amount of detail. I could see most scenes happenin in the show/comic book although some are slightly unrealistic. Raven would most likely still have empathetic abilities even if she lost the rest of her powers, we can see this in the episode "Fear Itself." A would definitely read a part 2. Overall, good job.

A review on the entire story;

Interesting story. Although drama/romances aren't really my kind of story, for what it is you did a good job. A few unrealistic scenes: is afraid of Raven and probably wouldn't be able to stay part in a battle for more than a minuet, Raven would still keep her empathetic abilities even if she lost the rest of her powers (depending on the version), and there's pretty much no way Robin would let Raven nor Starfire sit out on missions for very long. Besides this, pretty realist story. Good ending. Dialog is defiantly the strong point, I could see the characters saying almost every quote you have here. One of the weaker stories in my opinion but still good.

Love it

Oh may god! That was so sweet!
I was almost yelling awwwws all the reading (o)/
Love u

MY NAME IS FLORENCE

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HA! HA! I KNEW IT!

That part where beast boy says "let's watch something GOOD! "Something full of action and blood and carnage!" Is he implying that girls can like that too? 'Caus I'm a girl and my favorite movie is FREAKING FLASHPOINT PARODOX!

The part with the Titans East killed me, I'm laughing so hard I can't breath.