That was a really good story! they were a little ooc but i like that!

soooooo kawaii

your story is so cool

really love it

bye KLette

I totally loved this story, it was original and to the point. It seemed like it was real emotion behind the story and not just a fangirl's ravings. Please email me back if you get the chance to see this review! By the way this is a fav story plus author. And if you would like to view my profile, just search SakuraKagomeHaruno. Oh, and you've got good grammer, I usually hate the stories that have bad grammar and edit them on Microsoft Word Office 2003, the only reason I havn't given people edited versions of their stories is cause I just got internet, and just joined, so I don't meet the qualifications of a beta reader yet. I've got about 30 favorite anime, and right now, it's 2:36am and I just finished watching Code Geass... My life seems to be built on anime. Oh and how Ukyo was heartbroken like that, It happened to me twice and it took me 5 months to get over each of them... Boys, what'r ya gonna do? L8er!

The ending was so romantic. A perfect conclusion, though I do feel sorry for everyone else. Still, it was a great way to end the story. :) I can't believe it's over... (sad) And you're right. Akane and Ranma's love doesn't end! Long live their love! It's okay that the chapter wasn't long, as long as you put in it everything that you wanted. Great job and keep up the good writing. :)

sincerely, nihongoneko

Hey man,love the story. I can't wait to read the other ones. Really top quality work.

Great length, and some good action moments. A little bloody but you used the anger well. THe use of the R word in chapter 9 very heavy for my taste, but in all a great fic. Nicely done.

This was perfect, just perfect.

I really admired your story and love the way you write. It's very original and has everything that a RA lover wants!

Thank you so much for writing this. I hope you'll keep writing and be sure that, if you do, I'll be there reading your masterpieces.

Lu

Wow, man! This is a perfect story! It was so well written, that I felt all the time that I was seeing one of Ranma's regular chapters! I really love it, i've read it all in one afternoon. I simply couldn't stop reading! This should be the real end for the comic! Well done. )

Sniff, sniff, really cute!

:D *applaudes* Really good story i liked it so much i read it all in one sitting. If there is one thing I have to say us that when Akane finds out about ryoga being p-chan. Read the story "Man up and say it", the way you had akane find out was very simillar. But no biggie there and i liked the ending. Read man uo and say it to it also a very good RanAka

love it more soon.

Nice. Nice. Cute.

you can't kill Ranma,Kill all other Fiancees and ryoga...

I really get annoyed that Ryouga's still there!No, and Ukyo are not a good couple,He's too old for her...Anyway great job

Preety great!you have great potential as a Ranma1/2 writer.I have only one suggestion.I think the Epilogue should be the proposal,Wedding,Life after is based on what I read through out the story.I was originally in chapter 11 but I went back to the even in the anime/Manga Ranma really loved Akane ne!

Aw, that was a sweet chapter ending. And I like how Ukyo helped Ranma out, and how she was able to let him go. That definitely makes her the best out of the remaining three fiancees. I can't wait until the next chapter. :) Though it's kind of sad that it's ending.

sincerely, nihongoneko