please continue want to see the rest

nice story please update soon

pls update

Very Interesting

"gratefully".

And I am looking forward to more!

I backflip thrice in admiration.

Your English, bad?

! You write so well!

that was great! can't wait for more!

This is quite intriguing. May I recommend you keep pairings out of it? I think it would be more interesting that way. And also you might want to try breaking up those paragraphs a bit, it's easier on the eyes. I'm putting it on my alert list either way cause I'm really curious about how this'll turn out.

uh oh...this sounds bad for kakashi...can put him with iruka please...this sounds terrific...