joey styles and lilian garcia?

LOL

haha...

i like lilian and randy better...

please don't stop him from bugging her...

update soon...

Oh, yay! Lilian and Joey is co. Cute!

YES! YOU UPDATED! have i mentioned lately how much i LOVE this story? It's truly my favourite at the moment .. which would make the three of you my three favourite authors .. which makes you guys great .. and means i have great taste ..

*rubs eyes to rid of sleep* haha it's 8am (tuesday, still in the future here katy lmfao) and instead of working on my essay that's due tomorrow I thought I'd leave you a great review .. here goes ..

okay .. LOL Lilian's never say die attitude in this fic cracks me up, she's just too damn stubborn for her own good, I love it! Injured, and still trying to get the job done, I like it, I like it hehe ..

I love Shelton as the heel/bad guy in this fic. His character has this great intensity behind him, and it makes him such a powerful presence in this chapter. Great to see Lilian being so defensive of Joey even if she won't openly admit it. The banter between Shelt and Lil made their little interlude pass through every smoothly, and I love how the power grip kept changing between them; just when she thought she had him, he turns around and nails her with an awesome comeback. Did you really have to get Vince to tell her to stop? *pouts* I wanted her to keep going!

I thought Stephanie showing up was rather cool, especially when you guys included the line 'not as your boss, but as a friend.' I can so tell who came up with each line in this fic lol, your styles are all so different but they mesh really well.

Now. On to ... that .. that .. THING! HOW COULD YOU DO IT!

NOT WHORETON! NOT AGAIN! THAT'S NOT FAIR! YOU TOOK MY FAVOURITE STORY AND TARNISHED IT! I'm going to cry ... really ..

Okay, so I understand that it was intentionally set up so we could have the little dispute between Lil and Joey but c'mon ... anyone but him! can't we reverse the roles of Hass and Orton and make Charlie be with love with her? No? Please ... oh fine, I guess not. It was kind of cute how he was so bashful though (i have NO idea where that comes from lmfao) and great to see the inclusion of 'I'm still in my right mind and I am not going to sleep with you' I almost fell off my chair at that one, it instantly made the situation okay again haha .. I really enjoyed how Lilian managed to maintain the upper hand and not let her emotions get away with her. I can't BELIEVE she let him kiss her, but then again for the greater good yada yada yada ...

Now, the last bit. AW ... man, these two need to be locked in a room together until one submits .. well, you know what i mean .. I have to say I'm with Joey all the way on this one, the poor little guy! I can see him standing there with his arm all bandaged and his little glasses LMAO .. too cute. Lilian had to go and put her foot in it though and blame Joey for everything including the sun shining in her eyes haha ... this story is truly turning into a great romance/action fic and it's great to see that neither component is suffering .. the tension here was GREAT, and I loved the ending ...

but ...

because you ended on such a dramatic note, you have to update soon! like, NOW! please ... I'll tell you what your surprise is LOL

Fantastic work as usual, can't wait for more!

Oh, so she didn't feel anything for Randy, but she felt somethin' with Joey? I'll never understand you, Katy, I never will! LOL Glad they got that outta the way, though...now where will this partnership go?

I'm just obsessed with this! I'm big on Law and Order, so I just love the idea of a crime OC fic. I'm not surprised your main girly, or shall I say..senorita, is the main star. You make me love Lilian..and even Joey Styles. Although, I laughed when King and Coach made fun of him during his stint on Raw...

OMG, SHELTON HAS A GUN! :O I can't believe he was going to put a hand on Lily just because he has EGO issues or is just a giant SEXIST. I love Charlie. You know this already, don't you? XD *swoons*

I love the fluffy ending to this chapter..And I can't wait to see what else could go boom, with the McMahons running the show. I believe the juicy stuff just started. MUST. UPDATE. SOON!

The ending was too cute.

ah! girls! i think i just had three simultaneous heart attacks! lol that was incredible ! absolutely awesome!

and no .. no, i am not exaggerating! hmm, where to begin ..

okay, lol let's start with my favourite bit; “You shouldn’t… use… that voice all the time… it scares the children… in Uganda,” he struggled. LMAO what the hell, where did that come from? oh, it totally makes up for the day i've had! and oh dear .. i just re-read that last bit again .. WOAH GO JOEY! it was not the drugs kids, not the drugs .. he lurves her haha

but in all seriousness. Loved the way the Shelton scenario was handled, what an awesome way for it to go down, i just knew joey had to get his butt kicked lol .. i adored the 'independant' lilian bit, that was hiralious, and so true in this fic .. it was great! All at the same time with Lilian's sense bizarre sense of humour - I’ve got two guns pointed at my head and Charlie the Klutz trying to talk them down along with the Captain who’s pissed at me, the Lieutenant who hates me, and the Officer who wants into my pants. I’m fucked - I'm so glad the whoreton route wasn't taken! Again, brilliant contrast between 'angry lilian' and 'caring lilian', the pretending to be joey's wife was priceless, and I almost wet myself with the vigilante comment - typical garcia ..

this pairing, as unusual as it is, and as right as it seems, has really come to life in this story; kudos to the tension and the drama with a little humour mixed in - absolutely gorgeous girls .. fantastic stuff! thanks for updating :)

Ohh, poor Joey! But hey, he saved her life, which is all good. And the end of the chapter is sweet...Lil may have seemed uncomfortable with it, but I think deep in her heart, there's somethin' there for good ol' Joey Styles. 8-)

What a chapter! I love this story. I love the creativity and the idea of Lilian being some hard-nosed asskicker. It's awesome. You have a good thing going here. Keep working on it.

OH. MY. GOD!

YOU UPDATED! TWICE IN A WEEK! AND SHELTON TURNED ARGH

WOW GET YOUR DRAMA OUT WOT

i love it, i love it, i love it! i am officially proposing to the three of you hahaha ... you girls are fantastic .. will you marry me? haha joking aside lol this was *g o l d*

vince knows something they don't know, do dah, do dah, vince knows something joe and lil don't know but i know what it is! haha it's blatantly obvious that lil and joey are going to work things out at some stage! i loved the restaurant scene, especially the growing intimacy between the pair; starting off with joeys little slip up 'ah Detective .. Lilian ..' this set up for a nice interlude, especially lilian starting to reveal a bit more about herself, nice work with that girls i love how nothing has been rushed into .. loved how she put work slowly aside; not just slipping from the harsh exterior which allows for a smooth transition back to 'work lilian' later on - and started to notice her partner woot wo lol ( he does look adorable in that suit though *nods firmly* )

OKAY! now on to my favourite bit .. THE DRAMA! this rocked! Not once did I see Shelton turning on everyone! (lol to be honest i forget he was in this fic for a while there haha)That was a great move, and it breathed some life into the scene. Nice constrast seeing lilian in 'work mode' after the 'undercover' work .. I'm predicting Orton does something stupid next .. I don't know why, I can just see it in the future of this fic haha .. joey will either a) save the day, or b) turn up after lilian has been saved by .. hass? that's what i think will happen, and then mr styles will kick some south carolina butt hehehe

anyway, this story is amazing, extremely well co-ordinated for having three authors; I'm enjoying the cliffhanger, something that has often become so predictably used but not in this context; this one has a great result coming .. and now i can pester you guys until you update hahaha .. AWESOME!

My first reaction: "OH, YOU LITTLE BITCH!" How DARE you leave me like that! *huffs and pouts* Not fair, Katy, not fair! And where the hell is Joey? He better not screw this up! Which I know he won't but still...urgh, MORE NOW!

WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT YOU UPDATED! YAY! *does happy dance*

okay, so I'm just a little excited that this was finally updated! This story has to be one of my favourites at the moment for sure!

There is nothing better than a frustrated Lilian! Seeing her in this role just reaffirms the fact that either a) she is versatile enough to play any role, or b) we have an extremely talented trio of writers working on this fic - either way, this fic is rocking.

Loved the interaction between joey and lily, his character in this story mirrors his character on tv perfectly, and I love how he's trying so hard, yet failing fast lol - the line about him learning which buttons not to push was classic - Lilian dominating everything is fantastic, the harsh front she puts up, then the last sentence which demonstrates her determination perfectly. Massaro really is a rat, and I enjoyed the lack of whoreton in this chapter.

this was really worth the wait, loved the action in this chapter! I'm sure joey will pull up his rookie boots soon though .. hopefully, we won't have to wait long to find out! great work girls!

I'm glad you updated this one. It's got a lot of potential.

OMG, this story is, like, so great! LOL Stupid Joey Styles...gotta love the rookie cops. :P Anyway, can't wait for more! Three people writin' one story, now THAT is a challenge!

Gr...of course you'd right Adam and Amy as the robbers! LOL Very interesting, and never thought of these guys as anything but WWE stars, let alone officers of the law. Can't wait for more on this one!