I wonder if Dumbledore was internally freaking out about there still being Death Eaters in the future. I can see him totally being calm on the outside while the inner working of his mind just exploded and caught fire.

It sucked don't write

This story is shit. I can tell there will be no character development.

You got it wrong, trelawny didn't teach till after the marauders graduation, you know with the whole prophecy thing

I can't read anymore- this is shit, it's written so badly, there isn't enough detail of her jump back-how the fuck does she know anything at all. You should delete this piece of crap

that was perfect;)

yay they're ok

loved it x

yeah they should do it,they love each other so why not?

Awww they are so cute

loved it c

nice chapter!

:( nooooo...

;p

great chapter