Great job on the story, loved it, keep up the great work, well I'm off to read the sequel

Great story! Very well written and emotional. It's good that it's more rushed and doesn't have to much detail and fillers or it would be to angsty and difficult to read. Especially the ending.

why the sad ending im so friken sad and crying my butt off (T-T)

Oh thank god theres a sequel...! I had a moment of panic when i saw this was last chapter & naruto is qith sai & sasuke in hospital..!
This fic is pretty good! I couldn't put it down & finished in 1 go..

Ew Pedo-snake went to a whole different pedophile right there

Where is the sequal?

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oh shit he better just mean not get causht! I will not deal with a suicide! No no no no no no holy shit

Naruto what the fuck what the fuck don't ruin your insides! Do you want to poop on yourself later in life? That guys doesn't prepare! He's ruining your body! ughh stay with a friend or something! They'd let you if you told them. ughhhh

:c Muscles tearing is so sad. I'm so upset right now.

I did not need to read his blood staining his pants. D: Terrible god awful man. I'd kill hi. for you if I could darling. God, that brother too. I need to kill them!

wow it

awwww

I like all the names. Just tell me the one you choose.

God, Sasuke should have paid off his debt by now! He shouldn't have to work as a host anymore! :c