I think I'm gonna turn this into a script and see how it goes from there. If it's successful you can be part of the production! No promises but if it really works you might get to meet Pintel and Ragetti. I'll let you know how it goes!

I loved it! Ragetti is my favorite character, reading this almost broke my heart. Thank you so much. It was written beautifully and your portrayal of these two characters was spot on!

That was a pretty ingenious way of escaping from the prison. Kudos to Pintel for coming up with that. And the flashback story was sweet. I'm glad that Pintel did eventually warm up to Ragetti, even though it did take some doing.

yayyyyy soo good lovely fic really sweet and indepth

That was bloody awesome! You did a wonderful job of keeping them in character! I started reading this last night and instead of playing Assassin's Creed like I usually do in the morning I got up and read this. Fantastic job! I'm going to go read the others now!

Beautiful story! You write the characters perfectly, and this story was very enjoyable to read. I loved your back-story for Pintel and Ragetti, it was full of humor, sadness, and companionship. Great ending, it made me smile :)

I really enjoyed this story. The only thing I recommend you not do in the future is say 'The flashback started' or 'The flashback ended'. A better way to show that the story is back in the present is to say something like (for this story) 'Pintel raised his head and glanced at the cell around him. Memories could only serve as a haven for so long.'

I really liked how you consistently typed the accents. Many people either don't bother or give up halfway through.

This story was very well written. I enjoyed it.

~Rachel~

Ps. I sounded like my English teacher. o.o

Aww! This story made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!

AW! That was adorable, and I loved the scene when they were getting the dog... so CUTE! This story made me wanna write moog... dammit! I already have too much to do...

...-starts writing-

NO! This can't be the end!

No! Not one more chapter! AIE! Update soon!

AWW n_n Update!

Once again, though this may be predictable, UPDATE!

Yay! The origin of "Rags" and "Pinters"! Great!

*screams* update! Seriously!