My head spins after reading this.

that is hilaireous

I love this tory so much. It's extremely well written. But please update!

((Ah, so I have read this before! [I knew it sounded familiar] And both times I commented about the OOC-ness...well, good story anyway!))

I wince every time you misspell trial as trail. Other thanthat's this is a pretty good story, albeit sort of OOC for some chracters.

Great story! Although Sirius seemed a little OOC until the epilogue. And his middle name is Orion! But I loved all the angst you put into it, and how you made us wonder which side Remus was on!

I had difficulties to read « My Parent's secret keeper » because I'm French (without lots of english readings) but I really liked it !
Thank you for sharing your fiction.

Um, Sirius's middle name is Orion.
It's his great-great-great grandfather Phineas, who has Nigellus for a middle name.

I still can't tell if Remus is on Sirius' side or not. O_O I'm hopeless.

I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work.

If this "Epilouge" is Part 1, where's Part 2?

I wish you all the best, and that you someday become a great writer. However...

I'm sorry, but I did not appreciate your artistic endeavor for the following reasons:

1) Spelling and grammatical errors. Don't be hurt by this, but there are a lot. Each paragraph usually has several blanks where commas should be and at least one spelling error. Please do get somebody to spell-check for you.

2) It's never really clear when any of the chapters take place, except for that ill-placed timeline at the end of chapter 11 when the story is nearly over.

I think that's all I can really tell you without enrolling you into a college writing program.

you can change your name, you know sillyface.

And you should also finish your stories! Why dont you write fanfics anymore, I thought you still did? And read them? This is strange. Have you passed all your HP fanfiction-loving onto me? I don't like this. I feel like a dirty whore. GUNDAM WING I LOVE YOU!

And yeah, the story im writing is my chrimbo prezzie to you since im too fucking poor to buy anything. It's romance, so watch out. I promise not to put anything too raunchy in in though...though knowing me it might still be pretty raunchy. I like smut. It's still weird to have to refer to homosexual lovins as ! instead of simply lemon/lime or yaoi/shounen-ai.

and what the hell is with people constantly making DM a veela and then subsiquently getting harry pregnant? That's just wrong. MPREG is weird. veela are weird...though next time you talk to lib you should tell her that ive started to come 'round to her fascination with Tom Felton...hes a fitty.

Good story. Someone should tell Dumbles and Arthur just how Remus knew Sirius was innocent though ie tell them about Percy's rat going missing and who it really was.

Excellent!