Fuuma is such a good friend to Seishiro. He’s perfectly willing to call him out on his bullshit. It would be nice if he really did prod Seishiro to act on his feelings. The romantic ones, not… you know what i mean. ;)
I will say though that he’s also a perfect bratty teenager, because Seishiro shouldn’t be past his mid-thirties at this point. Smoking and missing eye aside, he’s hardly /old/.
I laughed at Seishiro’s “Do you think i’m sexy?” line. It’s so incongruous in this situation, yet it’s /exactly/ what Sei-chan would say. I really enjoyed both of them being so confused about what they’re really feeling and what the other is feeling, and trying to work it out together. It’s so comparatively wholesome compared to the manga, and it’s beautiful, if you don’t mind my playing on the title.

So not only do you do awesome tb and x vids but also fanfics? I loved this one shot. seishiro and subaru are my fave couple. Good that fumma was able to fulfill hokuto's wish that they stay together. i'm off to check out more of your fics right now!

Love this! I wish that CLAMP could have done right by these two.

Love it! _ Brilliant work!

i love your story...this one is just awesomeness!...in the beginning i was pretty bummed out with the angst subaru and the interaction between subaru and seishirou...i mean subaru was just so pessimistic about seishirou...and being with his pov made me almost think like subaru...but i just knew that depsite what ever sieshirou said, subaru is very special to him...my gosh, i hated Kamui...i wanted to slap him silly for daring to even think about touching seishirou's subaru but i changed my tune when i found out that kamui is actaully such a sweetheart...i can't belive kamiu was palying matchmacker...but nonetheless, this story was just so love! _

i love this so much, and i think your right, it's a better solution, and besides.

subaru really needs stabillity in his life, and seishiro was the only one (apart from hokuto) whom he trusted

Well written! Beautiful. _ You described things in a really unique way, lovely.

I won't grumble silently, don't worry about that! I always review when I enjoyed the story, and this is it!

At the beginning, your story seemed me a simple parody with humour, but in fact, when Subaru and Seishirou met, the seriousness appeared! I gred the text until the very end! I love it very much, and usually, I don't really appreciate reading in english, but I haven't been disappointed at all! Your style pleased me a lot!

Thank you for the good time!

Hope I'll read you next time!

Seishiro in denial again! _ It's great when that happens. I love this! If only Fuma really did go around fulfilling these sort of wishes.

I loved this story. Very well written. )

I was a bit confuse on what happened between Kamui and Seishiro but I think I get it now.

your side notes were very helpful in understanding this fic. not that you really need a basis for changing something in a fic, but it's nice that you at least tried to keep in believable. it's quite bothersome that kakyo blames Subaru as well, quite illogical too, but what can you expect from a man who lives to dream?

Overall lovely

XD Questa è spassosa! Davvero divertente! Anche se l'arrendevolezza di Subaru al proposito di Seishiro di portarlo a vivere con lui suona un po' strana...

Qui Fuuma sembra quasi buono... O.ò;

Definitely one of the best Seishiro/Subaru fics I found uptil now.

Your style is really nice. It's clear you're knowledgable about the manga and delved into the characters psyche a lot before you wrote. I see this in all you're fanfics.

This is combination with good storytelling is a sure win :)

This is quite different from the others I've read,esp your portrayal of i really like where the story is heading towards

Wow, Fuuma really dissed them.

I thought this was going to end really badly/sadly considering how it's labeled as angst...

But, I liked the ending. It was really sweet how he pushed them together. Though I immensely doubt Fuuma's capable of pushing Seishirou around or influencing him (my own opinion, seeing as how he completely ignored Fuuma's advice when he told him that he was wrong in his assumption of Subaru's true wish) not my idea, but, I liked it, nevertheless... Subaru's was so cute at the end.