It's like you read Aerith's mind. Her grief. Her love. Her despair. Everything is just so perfect. It makes perfect sense. Poor Zack. He freaking deserves the chick! I don't care who Cloud ends up with but Zack deserves to have Aerith. Anyone who says otherwise might not have played Crisis Core or might not understand the dept of their love.

great job

G.P.

This was pretty cool. I read "All But Blood" and liked it a lot. I'd hoped you'd continue the story, but since this is all there is, I read it and will continue to hope you don't stop altogether.

You have a neat writing style and I liked the way you went into Zack's head when he and Cloud were in Hojo's lab. Hojo is creepy, isn't he? It was perfect when he "Silenced" Zack though. I couldn't help but smile at that. Such a simple answer. But you never finished how it affected Cloud. And I'd like to know what he was saying when he mentioned stars. Was he seeing through Jenova's eyes? Or remembering something else entirely?

It's a shame that you haven't written anything more recently in the FF7 genre, but I will continue to watch your site and check alerts in hopes you add more to this delightful and angsty story. _

Please, don't quit!

What a great start.. so beautiful. I look forward for more!

This was lovely, sad, but very well written. I tahnk you for it, and for giving us a picture of the grife Aeris must have felt when Zack Died. I hope to see more of this anmd ABB soon. You are an amazing writer and I love your stories.

You don't have time to finish hearts of ice but you have time to do this?

YOU'RE ALIVE! YAY!

Sorry. Just happy to see one of my favorite authors writing again, even if I disagree with some of your pairings. _

I like the new take you have on Aeris/Aerith, with her already knowing about Zack's death, and deciding to stick to Cloud for that very reason. I don't think I've seen that before, because most authors seem to take her in-game dialogue as truth that she doesn't know(and I always found that rather sad).

Oh wow. I can't wait to read more.

I like your characterization. Sadly, I can't offer anything but praise.

Hey, you made a new fic! I had given up hope that you would ever make another... Glad to see that I was wrong.

Your characterization of Aeris is nice. She seems more... human. :)

I love CloudxAerisxZack triangles. This seems promising. I will be looking out for part two!

A good read, as are all your stories. :)

I love how you can take a seemingly-understood character and completely enhance one's perception of him/her. I think it's your uncanny ability to use the first-person perspective to amazing results.

But now I'm wondering if you'll be working on All But Blood some more...? :P

And Krista "Fisk". Like the new look. Doesn't roll off the tongue as well as Perry, but it sounds so much more... I dunno, badass. Like the Kingpin. Ooh, a bad girl... _

This is really good! I really want to know what happens next so please update soon!

Wow, amazed to see another story! Very nice. Hopefully updating will become a trend.

I never liked Aerith much in the game, but I like her in your fics.