So great! It’s so funny how similar his behavior is to Mamoru’s in teasing the one he liked. And I love that you used “beyond the pale”. It’s one of my absolute favorite phrases!

the moment i read the last sentence... i froze and then started to melt even it's not possible. :") bittersweet and couldn't be more bitter or sweet than this. seriously.

is there a sequel? haha

love your fic! i'm really becoming a fan of your works :D

*smiling* I adored the title and all that was implied it in, the way Nephrite had to work his way carefully and still is... will ever be walking carefully with Mako-chan.

Aw one hell of a one-shot. Very sweet. Great job. Look forward to reading your other works. Take care and god bless.

So lovely. Well-written with beautiful, vivid language and descriptions. I wish there was a follow-up, but I can probably imagine how Mako responded ;) Awesome work!

love the story! very cute. Ever consider writing a sequel?

This was cute.

*dies of sweetness*

I love that pairing! I only can remember her as Lita though. I get confused because both her and Mina's Japanses names both start with "m"s.

Nice story though!

This story is awesome! I love how you described everyhing with such detail, and your's is the 1st one I've read with no gramatical errors! It was a pleasure to read :)

SUGOI! It was so cute! _

Well written and quite enjoyable.

AH! Neprhrite is so freaking hot and this is so freaking good that I do not know what the hell to say. SO GOOD! I'm so not good with words, forgive me.

Cute! And i like your association of Mako with cinnamon...

This is one of the best shorts I've ever read. No, seriously, I'm not kidding. This was extremely well written and original, with nice bits of cleverness tied in. I loved it! _-