another great story

this is good, thanks

Again nice reference to the episodes at the end of the 1st season where you can see Gibbs with a redhead who in real life is Sean Murray's mom !

Nice reference to "Immortals"" where Sean Murray's real life brother Chad Murray played the obsessive victim… I can't believe that the young slim man of that episode is the same bearded mature man we saw on the making-of DVD's..

Now this was a sweet an tender moment.. If I remember right, Abby rarely gets this tender with McGee…

Hahaha I loved this chapter because of the "Columbo" references… I used to watch the show when I was a teenager in the 70's and I adored it… These scenes took me back to those days...

Great story :)

The cute nurse thing is more Tony than Tim, but I liked your story a lot!

Tim and Abby are so cute together! :)

Wow, brave kidnappers, with Gibbs present and all...

I'm wondering how I missed this. You, my dear, are inspirational. This was great, really enjoyed it.

hope you don't mind me calling you "dear". It's a term of indearment. :)

Ah, poor Tim. I would have quit after what Gibbs said. Long live McGee. Thanks for writing and giving me the pleasure of reading.

I can't believe the team didn't even consider McGee, he was left outside with no one to watch his back. And the guy also said the one that's caused him the most trouble, and that's usually McGee with his super awsome computer skills!

I think at the moment Gibbs, DiNozzo and David are on my shit list - I'm mean come on, why do they always forget about McGee when they alawys catch the unsub because of his computer skills.

Good start! ;)

This was a great story!

i love it it almost made me cry