wow, even though there's no chance of this being updated, I felt like I was reading a comic, and honestly the concistency of tone is amazing! I love stories like this it's so well paced aswell.
Even though it may never get updated again, I'm still gonna follow :)

It's been a while since you've even been on this site, but I hope you decide to come back and finish this story, it's great.

I really hope you come back to this story. I love the way you have Bruce and Helena caring so much for eachother, and hope that no matter what drama comes from the plot that that doesn't change because the way you write them together is so satisfying!

Huntress is thevdaughtre of batman

Is this story complete?

well this story is really good.. nice planning nice pacing (except for batman and huntress I mean if you never read much of the comics or didn't read them in order then you'll think their moving really quickly and won't really understand what NML is or understand their relationship but I guess some research wouldn't hurt to help out a reader with questions) the plot is good the characters are in character and it's well written except the grammar or wording mistake here or there but that's alright... the detail is also amazing how it connects with their universe but also the real world too.. I hope you do update this story it would be a shame to see all this planning and making up to big events go undone

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

Really enjoyed this so far, and am looking forward to where you're taking it. Couple of points: Screaming Dean was partially right when he said that it might be better when broken up into more paragraphs, but there are also many instances where you use full stops where commas or semi-colons might be more appropriate. I'm supposed to be working for the next week or so, but if it isn't too...offensive, I guess (don't know how FF etiquette works yet, as I've only just started), I'll proofread this as a word document and send it to you.

So far, it's absolutely brilliant in terms of plot and characterisation. Huntress is one of the best DC characters, (or she was before the recent 'World's Finest' retcon a few weeks ago) and you clearly know your stuff - loved the reference to Arthur Braun. Keep it up!

I've just read all of this story. Very impressed, keep up the good work. I always hoped someone would go ahead and explore the possibilities of Bruce/Helena and you've done it very well indeed. I can't wait for you to continue this. Maybe you know other stories of this kind that might interest me? There's not much of this on , sadly. But either way, Batman & Huntress is a great pairing to explore and you've done such an excellent job. I hope to read more in the future.

Are these guys the bads guys? With a pharmaceutical front?

Great story so far

Oh wow, only six reviews? I'm surprised since this is such an AMAZING story! It looks like you know your characters very well. You should continue this, if you're still planning on finishing it at all.

Super great ! I want to read MORE. PLease !

it was pretty awesome, I like your protrayal (i can't spell) of Batman. Keep it up i need more

Sorry it's taken so long for me to review. First and foremost, I've been fascinated with what Bruce and Helena would be like as a couple and you do a good job portraying their relationship and keeping their personalities as accurate as possible. Second, I noticed in this chapter that you've borrowed elements of Batman Begins for Bruce's family history, but it works well, since Batman Begins was supposed to be a study of how Batman could function in the real world and you said it yourself at the beginning that you're trying to go for a hyper-realistic feel. Anyway, I'd like you to know that I think you're doing a great job and I'd like to see more of your work.