Wonderful!

A few issues with this chapter - the main one being you keep switching voices. When it starts, it's in third person, then you switch to first person (Gibbs) and then you switch back to third person. Pick one or the other, but it has to be consistent.

I love how you write Jack and Elizabeth and how they are together - even when they're not exactly together - here. Can't wait to read more!

I'm really enjoying reading this story. I like that in this chapter Elizabeth wanted a thank you and now won't give back Jack's compass.

This was a fun chapter to read. I liked that Elizabeth basically did all the work herself of rescuing Jack.

Loved this chapter too! I love how you write Elizabeth.

Loved this first chapter! A great start.

Aww, that was cute :) I feel a little bad for Will, though :(

I love this fic!

I like he way this turns out. It's also different and it pulls me in...

Very nice. Loved seeing Will as the vengeful privateer. Would have enjoyed that battle scene drawn out a little more, but it was nice as 'twas.

i loved it. i loved how you described each character and i absolutely loved the ending!

That was the second story of you I red and I enjoyed it. I like the way you describe the characters, that you showed even Will has a breaking point, because in some stories, he is to forgiven for my taste.

And I really loved this last chapter, Lizzy and Jack both finally admitting that what they have is more then attraction and that is fear keeping them apart.

All right, Will is such a bastard in your fics. And I love that. :D

Will being evil. Moehahhaa. Sorry. Good job!

Well well, ain't we dressed prettier than a peach

You portray Jack so Jack-isch :d I love that!