Omgosh this was amazing. I love it. This is the most realistic Karma story I've read. So many portray them as being two love-sick teenagers but they aren't. I hope you one day continue this.

How lovely! But you've decided not to continue? Why on earth wouldn't you? this is FANTASTIC.

And wow, you're a great writer. I even enjoyed reading the A/N. : )

Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it.

I personally would prefer Karik to go on, but it's just more in character for him to stop. Great story!

sigh karma

wow just wow. that was irrevocably beautiful...kartik was just so in character- you captured his desires and reticence to taint gemma so well!

i stand in awe of this piece. it was lovely

"...cocking a knee-melting half grin as water flies out of his hair and all over me."

If Kartik's grin was knee-melting (and I'm sure it was), this was even more so. :-D

I also loved this story as a whole.

this is amazing

and i'm glad you made Kartik stop

it wouldn't really seem like him any other way

and the fighting before was really perfect

it was very Gemma and Kartik

...*drools* so good...need more...

Aw, I liked it. D It was rather sad about the whole ending thing with Kartik but terribly believable. Keep it up! D

I thought u did a great job. Well done.

WOW! I loved that! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! I love your descriptiveness! I must admit, some of the adjectives I forgot what they meant and actually had to look them up! Like obsidian, and cough nape cough. I thought it meant forehead till I looked it up and felt very stupid! I hope you add more to this! I love this kind of G/K fan fiction. Not as dramatic as some others (and I mean that in a good way! Sometimes all the drama can get frustrating...), but not lacking in drama so that it's a complete bore to read. I can't wait to read your other AGATB story!

One question though, what were they fighting over in the beginning? I loved that line there: 'and I decide that I should make Kartik angry more often'! I love that line! Anyway, keep up the writing! Preferably on this story...D

AH!

*does fluff-induced jig*

oh! my! GOD! that was amazing. utterly brilliant. i really dont know how to describe it...other than heart-throbbingly fantastic (woww...the adjectives are REALLY coming out now :P) and i seriously hope you continue this sometime. hinthint:asap. i like your idea of having Karma fluff WITHOUT the restrictions that they really do experience in 'real life'. i am addicted: tis a great idea, truly! WELL DONE-you should be very proud. excellent! :)

COuld you please write some more that was amazing

you had absolutly no flaws

was.. Another Karma story,just hotter!

Love the Karma!