Reviews for Why do I have to hide?
Elle4Life chapter 13 . 8/1/2019
Seriously bruh u trippin for reel dude how u gonna make something like this where Naruto is a Kitsune and he loves Hinata then ur not gonna finish it this is MADNESS omg u just left us at a cliffhanger who won the Chuunin exam we’ll never no, I’m raging hard as heck. Anyway don’t get me wrong it was great but now I’m annoyed btw if ur planning on finishing it then thanks it really good
ThePunnerLeJoueurdeMots081201 chapter 7 . 6/1/2017
Great story here, love the kitsune, even if it doesn't follow canon explanations on the Tailed Beasts. I love gow you exploit Japanese myths here. Still, there area few things I have to criticize:
-Kyuubi adopting Naruto is kinda strange. Making him a demon too, though a little less. I think u r making K too humanlike. Plus Naruto accepts him a little too quickly.
-I really don't like the fact that Naruto hates the 4th. Narutos supposed to understand why his father did that, and admire him. Plus the 4th's name is Minato Namikaze, but I guess you wrote that before it was revealed (I hate the name Arashi Kazama).
pikachucat chapter 12 . 8/18/2016
awesome more please
Guest chapter 13 . 7/2/2015
NO!
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU
WHY DID YOU STOP
THIS IS A CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT
pikachucat chapter 13 . 12/24/2014
awesome more please
zoombie-sama chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Nice, I think I'm going to enjoy reading this. Keep it up!
danielpaul chapter 5 . 4/2/2014
Imaginative chapter...good job of setting up the whole Fox demon realm. Interesting stuff.
danielpaul chapter 4 . 4/2/2014
Another fun chapter. This story is just a really good NaruHina tale with some very unusual twists. Good ideas!
danielpaul chapter 3 . 4/2/2014
Another great chapter to your story. I am amazed that it took me soooo long to find your story. I love the originality of it and the buildup to the ending with Naruto choosing to sit next to Hinata. Great!
danielpaul chapter 2 . 4/1/2014
I loved the chapter and the depiction of the characters. Your Hinata and Naruto are excellent. The dedication was one that brought back some memories at this point.
danielpaul chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
This is sure an unusual and super good story beginning. I like what you have done here. I will read on!
Wolfone10 chapter 12 . 12/4/2013
Why does every author make Hinata lose her fights? It's beyond me.
Dracoessa chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
The pink seven tailed vixen seems to be like the pink haired howler monkey banchee.
Dracoesaa chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
That's sweet of you Naruto, also I hope that you would make Hinata your vixen.
Dracoessa chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
Take that you pink banchee howler monkey!
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