Beautiful. Not a word wasted.

I LOVE THIS. Why is it so short? LOL. The title is PERFECT. I love Ronon's reflections on his people and the pressures/way people view him in Atlantis. It's so tragic that he has no home, always liminal.

You've managed to paint a vivid picture with only a few descriptions which is a mark of an excellent writer. I felt like I was right there with Ronon. I loved the mention of the speech patterns and the scents. It was just all so tangible.

I didn't want Ronon to go because you've made it all sound so peaceful, accepting and relaxed that I want to stay.

Excellent job! I hope to read more from you soon!

Beautiful and sad. You really captured Ronon well.

So short, yet so beautiful. Your portrayal of Ronon is spot on and almost heartbreaking in a way. Wonderfully done! Thank you!