At first I thought: okay, why parody? this is just another Rachel/Crane story

then I read on and thought: Holy crap!

This is so funny.

I can hardly stop laughing.

OMG, this is so wonderfully twisted. Almost all the way through I was, wtf? and then I just collapsed into giggles

Poor Dr. Crane ! And he thought being zapped by his own fear toxin was traumatic!

oh, my gosh, so brilliant. i really enjoyed it like no other parody before. my family thought i was dying, cause i didn't stop laughing. if you have such brilliant funny ideas again, please write a ff and share them with us.

hahahaha WOW

i'm dying here, woman

you SLAY me

Holy crap. I haven't laughed like this since...well, since I dreamed I was the Joker, and the Scarecrow and I were taking turns punching Robin in the face, and then we stopped to eat biscuits. Hot, buttery biscuits...

I woke up laughing much the way I did after reading this.

(Erm...?)

Good story! It was entertaining, though weird at some parts. Very interesting.

Delightful! I love, love, love this, and am only sorry it took me so long to know you'd written it! I guess we can all feel proud that in the end, Crane got his.

lol. odd and a bit disturbing, but extremely entertaining. i hope you'll write more stuff like this. :)

Dear god... I was drinking a coke at the time of reading this and I am now wearing the larger part of it on my shirt...

This was hilarious! Dear god it was hilarious!

I despise the pairing of Crane and Dawes... but this was a great exception!

I am reminded of the CSI episode Fur and Loathing in Las Vegas... with the furries and plushies...

I seem to love everything you write... even something as insane as this... it was extremely enjoyable, good job!

In the name of all that is holy ... !

Royalty, that was HILARIOUS. "Ooh, that wascally wabbit is in my cawwots again,” almost made me fall out of my chair.

My hat off to you for a brilliant farce, complete with every stereotype one could ask for - or not ;-)

No problem! Great finesse, too. Haha...foodstuffs. I love it.

All I can say is wow...that was interesting. Poor Crane... :)

This was HILARIOUS! I really hope that there's going to be another one soon!

That was terribly amusing...I love farce and you do it so well! I hope you may consider doing more because the way you wrote Crane here is so iconic to some of the insipid romances on this fandom! Great stuff.