| Reviews for The Turmoil Within |
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   Vadercat chapter 7 . 8/26/2019 Nothing like a brush with death to make you appreciate home and hearth more... |
| starlight guardian chapter 3 . 12/30/2017 I love how you have the different POV's and advance the story. Very adept, and definitely true to the characters. |
| aithreachas chapter 7 . 1/3/2007 Exceptional...Truly, truly exceptional...very well done. You have my heartfelt thanks for a great story. |
| reen212000 chapter 7 . 9/14/2006 Yay! He's gonna be just fine... |
| Alipeeps chapter 7 . 9/14/2006 Aw lovely ending. Just beautiful. I love your description of John and Elizabeth's shared guilt and John's exhaustion and his need to see the sunrise and let it burn away the nightmares. Excellent fic. |
| Stealth Dragon chapter 7 . 9/13/2006 Right on. Sweet ending. It all came together very nicely. Awesome, awesome, awesome. |
| ManicTater chapter 7 . 9/13/2006 Wonderful way to end the fic. Thanks so much for sharing. |
| TheNaggingCube chapter 7 . 9/13/2006 fabulous ending to an intense story and disturbing but wonderful episode. well done! |
| Titan5 chapter 7 . 9/13/2006 Awesome, totally and completely awesome. Loved the different POV and all were very gripping and real! Excellent job as always! |
| TangledPencils chapter 7 . 9/13/2006 Great chapter, you really wrote this tag extremely well. Good job. |
| FrogDancer42 chapter 6 . 9/12/2006 So well done! The names of the chapters really add to it. I like the different voices that you use, though a lot of the reflectiveness sounds the same, which probably can't be helped. :-) Thanks for you work! Frog |
| Ditzyleo chapter 6 . 9/12/2006 Beautifully written! Finally someone who doesn't go over the top with the whole talking to kate thing! Loved it all- the characters were all in character and totally believable reactions. I couldn't find a single fault! Hoping there are a few more chapters though... |
| Sophie Fatale chapter 6 . 9/12/2006 My favourite so far :) Great chapter bye |
| Krows Scared chapter 6 . 9/12/2006 This has got to be my favourite of all the tags to Common Ground. The introspective thoughts of everyone is all 'in character' and so heavily filled with emotion it's almost like feeling it yourself. A cracking piece of writing, my favourite bits so far are John's reaction to Carson's treatment plan and finally someone has written John not having a massively over dramatic reaction to Kate *rolls eyes* and Kate's conversation with Carson about Johns previous experiences with 'Shrinks' after Afganistan. Class writing that. I'm hoping that you've still got a couple of chapters left... |
| Alipeeps chapter 6 . 9/12/2006 Beautiful chapter. I love how you are structuring this story with each chapter focusing on one team member and their reactions to what happened, their thoughts and their struggles to cope. I think you captured Weir's voice very well and particularly her thoughts on diplomacy and her doubts about her choices, about the things she's had to cope with since coming to Atlantis. Nicely done. |
