very powerful. in the midst of his divorce and all the 'blood and tears' as liv put it in web, he realized how much he loved her, was in love with her, and needed her. excellent oneshot.

dude. didn't he just vomit? and he's kissing her? oh god, that's wrong in 8 different ways.

I'm sorry. the story was really great and i love it, but all could think at the end was "He just vomited and he's kissing her. Oh God, that's gross."

I'm really sorry.

Really great story-well written. But the entire kiss scene I was thinking, "Ew...he just threw up..."

That was absolutely beautifully written! It's a refreshing change from 'Elliot gets mad at Olivia, Olivia gets sad, there are lots of words, they kiss.' In this fic there are no need for an elaborate rant. You've balaned speech and description perfectly and not made this cheesy at all. Brilliant!

What terrific, evocative writing. Just had to let you know I think this is powerful stuff!

Gah. Lurve it. Lurve you. Did a good job characterizing that sucking blackness El was experiencing. Heart you forever.

Nice job - always a pleasure to read your works -

wow, I really like this, the descriptions, the sky and the two of them, really beautiful. I hope it's not a oneshot because I just want it to continue. Great job, keep writing.

Excellent. Adding this to my favorites.

LOVE LOVE LOVE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I loved the way you wrote this! is was beautiful..and so-THEM!

Yes... excellent... Must have the EOness...

really really well written! i loved it! such a great writer!

xo,

Lo

yay! that was so good! Very impressive!

EOness!

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