Damnit! Sora is really pain in the ass! Sorry, I'm talking about, why Roxas is Sora's Nobody. Really, I hope, he is Ventus or anyone else (Not all, of course, you dumb! (whoever think about it)) Nobody.

that was interesting...

i never cry, but at times i can feel like im close too, and its not a good feeling. Your story is so painfully good, stupid Axel and his desperate cling to everything Xemnas says. How can it be that ur story has not reached 100 reviews yet, or more. It deserves to. Its such a lovely story that makes you smile, but at the same time, want to cry. Ill be reading your sequel as well. Dont worry, ill review. ;)

awesome story. even though axel is a little pmsy the story was good nontheless

Aww - what a sad ending. But I can't wait to start the sequel. This story was great, I especially love "angry" Axel, I don't know why *laughs* Keep up the great work, you have amazing writing talent.

I'm crying, this is so sad- the best AkuRoku I've ever read. Your writing style is great. I love how you portrayed the characters, and even though I'm going to be depressed forever because of this, I love you for it. Overall, beautiful job- can't wait to read the sequal!

Cool, swearing Axel.

You spelt Xaldin wrong... Sorry if I annoyed you...

Please update this is realy good, I like it alot and well there are not many good AxelRoxas stories out there!

I realy do like this one better than some of the other ones on here it has a great start. I guess in the end it is up to you but I realy hope you continue.

Aw poor Axel T_T

rawr! ohmygod! that ruled! but ah, axel didnt make it in time! why? i will go and read ur sequel. great story btw! i loved it!

Beautiful, I'll go and read the sequel immediately

Aw... Poor Axel!

omg this has got to be the cutest story I've ever read! I can't wait to read the sequel...(seriously it brought tears to my eyes). Awesome job!

wow that was sad,poor axel...great job tho

~crys~ WHY! WHY! ~crys~

Friend: SHUTUP!

Me: b-but roxas... and... axel!

Friend: _