Let's just say I have read this fic in an entirely unhealthy fashion but as my previous reviews stated this ones absolutely fantastic. It had charm, pain, humor, redemption and most importantly heart. This fic may be one of the older ones on your roster, but it still holds the same passion and understanding that you obviously have for the show and those two crazy kids. That you managed all characters to stay canon so well was an impressive feat that I will mention once more. All in all, for a first multy chapter, you opened up with a bang. Now all you got to do is keep it up. Piece of cake, right?... Right!?

Ah the inevitable miss communication between are favorite two bookwarms. The irony that even those armed with literary knowledge succumbe to the most basic of emotions. Fear. Also building our heroes back up from a landslide is always fun and Jess/Rory excel at it.

Damn it Rory. Again the insecurity, why do we always go for the bad choice when we are lost? Because it hurts enough that we feel like that is the punishment enough. Lovely chapter by the way.

The trait of good writing is when you have the other person in a couple duo that is not the person we root for and for the reason that she did something bad but because she is not the person we root for in this case Rory. I think you have done a really good job in the way you portrayed Jen. She was that person and we all feel for her. On the other hand Logans is a d... Okay I'll stop here.

I got to say, I like how you have managed to show how these two characters are on their own. In previous coulke of chapters also. J like it because the heart of the show was always dialoge and that was something that flows really well here. Also it is nice to see them interact properly so we can see what makes them Jess/Rory and not just Jess and Rory. What makes you see them as a one entity and I think you have shown it here in a compelling way.

Ah the "reunion". Expected it to be awkward and low and behold our two kids are ae awkward as ever. Do not need to say this was so good it made me hard press to remember if this scene really happened in the show.

Okay Jess and Luke to the freaking mirror because you just get these characters. I almost feel the terrible need to be anywhere else but there laced with the self deprecated respect they have over each other. Loved it.

Your Lorelai and Rory banter is spot on. Loved it. I could just imagine it. Also the denial is deep with those two kids.

All I have to say. God damn it Rory. Now let's see about the rest...

This story is great. It definitely helped cure my RJ need. I have been watching season 2 of Gilmore GIrls and Rory and Jess are just perfection together damn it.

Yay! Cutest. Thing. EVER!

Now, THIS chapter felt in-character for Jess. This and the first one just felt absolutely right. In with a bang, out with a bang. Incredibly perfect and wonderful. *hearts*

I'll be honest, the way you've written Jess has been slightly... off... throughout this whole fic. This chapter was no exception. I don't know what it is, but it somehow feels like you've written teen!Jess instead of incredible adult!Jess.

And that is my ConCrit for this chapter, since I can't come up with anything else to say besides "aw."

Thank god! At first I thought they were going to miss it yet again, but, well, thank GOD!

For once, possibly the one and only time in their long, complicated history together, their timing was just exactly right for things to fall into place.

FINALLY!

Everyone knows you can never resist Jess Sex! It's like gravity. You can deny it for awhile, but eventually you're just gonna come in for a crash landing.

Yay! Fixed! (Sort of...)

Fantastic super-wonderful excellent chapter complete with a bit of course-correct for the Lit.. soon to be followed by a full about by the keel! Because of course there's going to be some epic canoodling in the very near future. (Oh my god did I really just type that? Please pretend I didn't since my delete key is currently missing from my computer and the toothpick I've been using to poke the little button thingy inside just broke...)