wow. real good. really makes me think aobut how lucky i am to have parents, even if i dont like them sometimes. also, the 'sans teeth' poem is from Shakespear's 'As You Like IT' isnt it? anyways, good job! home you come back soon. you are by far my favorite author.

as always, amazingly well done ) ... Man you gotta stop makeing me tear up *sniffs*

Awesome! I really liked the ending it was like... bam! lol.

This is so sweet and sad! I love it very much. I would be cool if you made another story out of this one.

I l iked this. It was really well written

Nicely written. One has to admit that it takes one hell of a will to keep going in situations like that, where the loneliness itself can kill. However, even the strongest wall can crumble from time to time...

Zomg it's so sad! And cute! Thank you for dedicating it to me! *Feels to special for words* Your the best! T-T

It's so cute! What an awesome idea! I wish I could have seen Sakura's reaction to those words! I love it!