Thank you for this awesome story
It's nice to read more about SGA since I miss this show like crazy.

Wow, what an incredible story. It had everything from Shepwhump to lot's of tender loving care for John. I Loved Maj as a caring mother figure for John. I had a good cry at the end with his reunion with Maj. One of the best fan fics I've read. Brilliantly written.

I loved this story, Maj is wonderful, and the was so happy with the reunion. The scene with the Wraith and the Wraith version of Cerberus was very vivid. Was also happy with the punishment meted out to the bad guys, although a little more humiliation for the administration of Ioth would have been great.

This was amazing. For the past two days I have devoured every word and I was so sad to see it end. Thank you for such a lush, beautiful story that will stay with me for a long, long time.

Очень, очень хорошая история. Спасибо.

I like this Elizabeth ALOT!

Absolutely wonderful story. I am going to miss Maj and Ris though.

Thank you! I can safely say that was one of the best stories I've read so far. It kept me reading all day (literally.)

On a side note in chapter 22 you wrote "the calvary hasn't come." calvary is the hill in Jerusalem where Jesus as crucified. I'm pretty sure that you meant cavalry in this case. :)

Great job!

Wow!.. This was an amazing story.. I felt sorry for John, for all the pain and sufferings he experienced..but he survived... I really love John Sheppard.. I love the mother and son story.. Love John and Maj.. You did a great job!.. Thank you very much.. )

I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I had to leave a review because I LOVED this story! Very well written and you kept me captivated till the end because it actually had a plot! I loved the characters and everything was so well thought out and there was plenty of whumping to keep me happy! I do hope you are still writing Atlantis fics ... :-)

Sorry for the flood of comments, you don’t have to reply to them. Just wanted to express my appreciation for this fantastic story. Totally loved all the OCs and the beasties (I want a pet iaret!). Great action and whump, plus an extremely complex and interesting plot. And a perfect ending. What more could a reader want? "Your planet is abusive to me” – best line ever! Pretty much sums up John’s experience with the Pegasus Galaxy. Thanks for writing!

Ps. Btw have you ever seen ‘Rescue Dawn’ or ‘The Machinist’? From reading your stories I get the feeling that you’d really like those movies, they’re favs of mine.

Beautiful healing scenes, thank you :)

Aw I like Maj. Your OCs are always very interesting and I have a lot of fun visualizing them. The Lyrets are also a great other-worldly touch.

The fight scenes are wonderful! Poor John.

I love the tension and mystery you build up in the first chapter, I'm very excited to read on :)