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I enjoyed the story or at least what has been written so far, I'm rather angry that you haven't upated in years and feel you have wasted my time by writing enough to hook me to your story but not finishing it. If you're going to post a story stay committed to it or don't post it at all!

ACK NO UPDATES IN 2 YEARS

dont just LEAVE IT THERE!

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

And the cliff hanger stayed there for at least 2 years.

Well, are you going to update again? coz it would be bad for it to be abandon like tis~

this chapter was so funny! i laughed my ass off! g!reat job! love your story!

wow i really love your story! it's really really good! i mean it.

OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY 3

omg please update soon! i'm thoroughly enjoying this story!

o_o tis ended up so different from what i was expecting. its interesting. i cant wait for more xD

I COMPLETELY LUV IT! 3

don't let it be a cliff hanger- end it here.

you have sasuke acting like a little bitch- following all of enzra's orders/suggestions- but with naruto he's all grrr-i'm the boss. sasuke was halfway mated to him before he even knew what naruto was or what naruto was forcing him into. and now sasuke has to put up with naruto having children with a bird demon. and why does naruto have to listen to his brother- naruto can turn down the family name/legacy and make his own choices if that's what it takes. and kyuubi beating up naruto because naruto sniffed his wife's pussy...well that's kyuubi's fault and his wife's fault- they knew naruto was going into heat and they didn't take the proper precautions- and since kyuubi is the lord of the manor- it is his responsibility to make certain naruto is locked up securely when he's supposed to be.

there's just too much stuff that you have happening that you don't explain until later and then the explanation has holes in it...i liked the idea of it but i don't like the execution of it so much. i think i'll stop reading- but if you enjoy writing it you should continue- because do what makes you happy

Sasuke would need to talk to Sai. The later had earned his chance with Naruto

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this is ridiculous. naruto has known him less than half a day. naruto only showed interest in making a new student feel welcome. that sasuke would think that sai wanted to court naruto or naruto would want to be courted by sai (and who is he to say who is allowed to court naruto)- it's just fucking ridiculous. and why can't sasuke tell that it's him that sai is interested in. is your sasuke a retard? and if sasuke wants naruto why the fuck doesn't he say something.. isn't he an UCHIA? or in this AU are uchia's pussies?

and naruto told neji that he didn't take orders from neji. well when neji ordered naruto to speak to him alone; naruto agreed with no argument.

i like parts of this story- but the filler parts kinda annoy me. whether i enjoy it or not is not the issue though. as long as you enjoyed writing it- that's all that matters. thanks

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next chapter:

enzra was so worried about sasuke that she drew a seal on his chest using something that would smear- how stupid is that- if it was important to keep him safe you'd think she'd use a quick drying or powder it or use a permanent marker, etc...

after letting him sleep for hours. after drawing the seal on him. after evading his questions. she then says she's going to take him home for his own safety. of course she'd say it when it was too late_ when she could have taken him home hours ago while he was still unconcious...so your actions to protect sasuke were weak and easy to see that that's what you wanted them to be.

even if sasuke were only unconcious for 20 minutes- that was still plenty of time to put him in a car and have him on his way before naruto found out. or the handcuffs seemed to make him go unconcious- just keep him in them till she got him home.

Sasuke would need to talk to Sai. The later had earned his chance with Naruto

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this is ridiculous. naruto has known him less than half a day. naruto only showed interest in making a new student feel welcome. that sasuke would think that sai wanted to court naruto or naruto would want to be courted by sai (and who is he to say who is allowed to court naruto)- it's just fucking ridiculous. and why can't sasuke tell that it's him that sai is interested in. is your sasuke a retard? and if sasuke wants naruto why the fuck doesn't he say something.. isn't he an UCHIA? or in this AU are uchia's pussies?

and naruto told neji that he didn't take orders from neji. well when neji ordered naruto to speak to him alone; naruto agreed with no argument.

i like parts of this story- but the filler parts kinda annoy me. whether i enjoy it or not is not the issue though. as long as you enjoyed writing it- that's all that matters. thanks

last chapter you had ezra or whatever her name is tell sasuke that she'll explain everything to him tomorrow- well the rest of the last chapter and all of this chapter and she still hasn't told sasuke everything- actually she's told him nothing. did you forget?

Speaking of setting, I have no idea what country this in...which will make explaining the governemtn difficult. At some point the government will come into play...at that time I will ask you not to make me explain it cause I will be pulling it out of my butt enough as it is. Time period is also shaky. Good luck with that.

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that's the beauty of AU's...if people question anything, you just say that's the way it is in your Alternate universe in which this story is set. You want the sky to be purple with pink clouds-no problem. you want boys to have assholes, penises and vaginas with peacock feathers instead of pubes-fine...AU means 'alternate'- as in anything other than the expected or ordinary-if you wish. look forward to reading