This Kakashi is just too much, doesn’t he have a conscience whatsoever?

Kakashi is an ass, Sasuke is plain stupid, Sakura is just useless and the 3 elders are the dumbest people in history

The prank was hilarious, perhaps the beginning of something more XD

I don’t like how Kakashi doesn’t care for Naruto’s life so it’s the 1st thing I disagree in this story

Badass Naruto in the HOUSEEEEE

A fainting standing Hinata is a new fresh look n her XD

Nice background story on the Hyuga’s

The background of the Kyuubi Attack is very close to the truth in why it attacked, and it’s very interesting since back in 2006 there was very little clues to what happened on that night

Ok I guess. It has a lot of things wrong. Like a big one. The seal was done by the Death God so no tailed beast but maybe 10 tails could get though it without Narutos help.

Well the prologue certainly is interesting

Ok I know that I am about a decade late but damn this chapter pissed me off. I was absolutely loving this fanfic. It had plenty of bad ass moments, some good character development, a nice bit of humor, and my favorite bit was how Naruto didn’t tolerate bullshit from anybody. In this chapter Naruto stated he would tear Neji’s eyes out and even got Hiashi’s blessing to do just that. I was thinking that finally, I had found a fanfic where the piece of shit that is Neji, who’s even more of a jackass here than in canon, would finally get what he deserves and have those precious eyes of his ripped out. Then, you do what just about every other fic that has a badass Naruto does, and have him promise not to because Hinata asked him to. It’s such a stupid fucking reason that every author uses and it drives me nuts. It’s especially infuriating here because you had Naruto get permission to do that from the clan head then had everybody hear that he would do it, only to have him promise not to five minutes later.

I don't know if Naruto Predator is your own story. But it makes me laugh. As I work in wattpad and I have a book called Naruto the Predator as well as I have a predator series. With no predators.

What the hell man this is why there are never any good fan fiction Because Naruto is unable to be mad or angry and lash out or he will be viewed as the bad guy and you have him not take vengeance on Neji for what he did. And it’s so annoying that you had naruto not do what he was planning to do to neji just because he is whipped by Hinata and convinced him not to hurt him because he is “family”. I haven’t even read the neji and naruto battle and I don’t even want to I’m so sick of these shitty fanfics that Naruto cannot becomes angry and the battle with naruto and neji in every single god damn fanfic will have naruto sprouting some stupid shit about not believing in fate just like in the anime but said differently. Your naruto fan stories would be so much better if it wasn’t always a naruto and Hinata pairing and you let naruto do whatever he wants without Hinata trying to stop him. There are few if not rare naruto fan stories the are not a Hinata and naruto fanfic and naruto is actually able to be mad without being viewed as the bad guy.

Again with the dumbshit.

What happened to him being guarded by people they can trust in turns? Council had the guards they control leave once wouldnt it make sense to keep guards on him now and only ones they can trust after one assassination attempt? Its fucking obvious.

Why no frog or fox summons. Cant say he cant do it because his father can.

Why the fuck isnt one of his fathers harashin seals on him or in his room so he can port in at the first sign of trouble. So much obvious shit but here we go with the nonsense of thos chapter.

Author failed miserably making that stupid vegetarian death scene not seem forced as hell. Put too much effort into making him OP for the bullshit to make any kind of sense.

He couldve won at any time ahead of sasuke tapping into the strength. Add in he has trained his ass off to beat people stronger than Kate's WHILE wearing weights and shit and without focusing on spades power. Its horseshit even after tapping into what strength sasuke COULD handle that he'd push him that far with his own strength and Slade's.

It's why you dont make your MC overly OP and force an existing stories characters to fit without changing them to match up. You write an OP character losing stupid fights he should win with ease because you didnt balance shit.