Oh my god.
I can’t breathe.
I can’t stop laughing.
It all happened so fast!
Oh my god!
I freaking love it!
I kinda want to write a fic of what happened THAT night in Naruto’s dream, just cause some imagery popped into my head and now I want to write it, but everything else? Perfect. I loved it. I still can’t breathe.
Well done, full round of applause from me!

GYAAAHHH! MUST...POST...REVIEW...fallen...under...effects... of...jutsu...

*Snicker* Anyway, fun story, just twisted enough, and certainly a good read. The prankster trapped by his own dreams, a massive amount of misunderstanding, and the actions of another person's prank - priceless. A great little, short, one-shot, that is entertaining with just the right amount and kind of hilarity, without being overwhelming.

It was Neji who pretended to be Hiashi, wasn't it?

It was kinda hard to distinguish the change from the "dream" to the reality. But overall it was nice
:P

I think the story itself is a bit hard to follow, although a good concept in itself, I couldn't truly tell what was going on at a certain part.

Cool story

YOU'RE FUCKING NITS THAT MADE NO SENSE AT ALL

I loved this. It was very well written. I hope to find more stories like this and of this quality. Thank you for writing!

got really confused at first...

but that was really good! simply hilarious!

If I review, does that get me out of the jutsu?

Totally awesome story, very funny. Most enjoyable ;)

Great stuff. I liked the premise. Your writing is excellent as always, and the story was highly entertaining. I don't think I've ever considered a Hiashi that was amenable to the match, but it was interesting.

this is one fuck up story

you are crazy and awsome the same time. nice story its funny and insane.

Great 1-shot.

I loved it!