Why did u stop write this story it's really good

please continue the story. i like it a lot. please continue.

Okay.. well, do a grammar check, it needs it. On the other hand, the story has a really good plot, and would be well written,if you did a grammar check. It's still enjoyable though. Please update soon.

Well it was short but i liked it u should wright more! -

so good next time try for a longer chapter

lol sakuras a slut

serious time

its been a week so dont sweet it anyway some tips not flames but constructive critisism

1- I am sorry but people do not like jumbled up words try spacing the story out a little more

2- Great plot but try to use a little better grammer

3. Love the IC/OOC but try to use puntuation

again great plot good writting update soon

peace

awesome keep going!

Hm...really intresting. I like it. Keep udating kay. Your going to go on my fav. authors list and story list. I like how Hinata is changing to become a cold person. Not that it's a bad thing and all...I like how she's becoming strong. Keep at it kay. Bye!-

that was great.

hope to read more.

p.s. i am putting this in my favorit stories list.

you are quite the poetic one huh?

that was so good you have to upate soon

hm, i like

I like the poem but you might want to space out the real story. Try not to use chatspeak; makes my head and other people's head hurt.

Dialogue is hard to read, being all bunched up. Please use punctuations and be careful with spelling. Try and get a beta if you want.

Anyway, keep writing~! _~

it was good, need alittle help in the grammar, but is ok, please continue