I love this story!

god way to bring tears to my eyes! You HAD to bring up Maes! BAD writer! :P

Really liked this chapter! And don't worry I'm a mean writer too always killing of the characters and killing happy cliches and adding cliffies :P

Ok, that was a very sweet ending - About the story in general, I liked the idea of Roy performing human transmutation, and the Alice/Malice game of names was pretty cool. There was more EdWin than I would have liked, since I started reading only for the Royai. And the fact that you used elements from both the first series and the manga/Brotherhood was a bit confusing. But over all it was quite interesting and I enjoyed it very much :)

incredibe

Okay, I just finished reading this story and I loved it. and although ed was kind of out of character, you had good character development. not to mention the royai...i got those tingly butterfly feelings. I don't think any other stories gave me as many butterflies as i got while reading this. and that's saying a lot since i read a lot of fanfiction. so congratulations on that part as well. you are a very good author and i hope writing is still a part of your life in the future!

Megg

I'm going to put this story to fav

yeayyyyy a happy ending ! awesome x)

I absolutly LUVE this story. And Last Train to Central. You should finish that one. I read this fic every day! No lie

Wow, I had been planning to read this story for about a week now and I finally got around to, a ton of hours later and I'm finished!

Loved this story and had me on edge the whole time!

I spent the whole night reading this, and it was worth it!

I just felt Ed was OOC, but nothing that couldnt be ignored. Anyway thank you for writing, its been a long time since you completed this (4 years!) are you even still writing fanfics? Anyway, thank you very much for the entertainment!

yay for royai!

At first I wasn't sure where your plot was going but after I got into it it was great. Definitely not a Classic but still worth rereading many times just for fun. XD The Grammar was consistant all the way through and all of the characters stayed in character, which isn't as common as you would think -_-. i'm sorry this review is so short but it's past midnight and I thought you would appreciate getting a lame review more than no review at all.

keep up the great work and i hope to read more of your work soon (though not tonight)

-sofi

This was one of the most epicest Royai fanfics I have ever read in my life; so much hate, love and embarassment bubbled up inside of me in parts of the story, and I just became engrossed into the whole thing more and more. I really commend you're writing skills; you have a talent which I for one, seriously lack but hopefully with a little more practice, might be halfway from where you are now. I have enjoyed this the whole way through and I can't think of any critisms or negative comments - I was just way too awesome :3

Lol "forever?" I enjoyed this chapter :) to bad it had to end

*winds blows silently* ...O.o wow...