That was a solid little fic. Nice read :)

I enjoyed the story, but I have a tiny quibble about the ending; it wasn't that Harry didn't *believe* in God, it was that he didn't think he was *worthy* of God. He saw himself as too flawed, as the source of too much pain to be truly welcome amongst his Host. In some ways, Micheal being his best friend is bad for Harry, as he's the standard he keeps judging himself against. And the fact that he will kill, he will pay evil unto evildoers if it needs to be done, and he people he helps keep dying (regardless of how many he *does* save), are why he lacks that faith.

Otherwise, an amazing story. Kudos.

Great story

love

You've done very well with this story and I thank you for writing it. I'm glad I took the time to run a search. It's stories like these that make this site worth being a part of. I'm glad you held to your course and finished it.

You've got Morgan down to a "T". Nicely done.

Ah... Now I have my Jay and Silent Bob fix. Good entrance for them and you blended the two sets of characters well. I can imagine what Harry did just from the way everyone was standing back. Goog. Very good indeed.

Yet another good chapter. I did notice a couple wording mistakes but nothing to ruin the story. Nice work.

Out of all the chapters so far this one reads the most like the books. Good job.

Water into vodka? At least she's up with the times.

Nice. Slipping the pool in there like that.

Good depiction of Mab. Adding in another power that "needs" the girl. Complicated.

Getting over his head with women is our Harry.

Another good chapter. Pat yourself on the back. You deserve it.

This is getting really good. Second best chapter so far. Good interaction among the characters. Morgan was perfect.