Hi author I like to ask something.i like to ask if what is the first story here until the end bec.i can't understand

Wow! i could only say "wow"!

THis is good! this storyline carries so much into the future!

i like this, short and sweet but carries much weight.

Thank you!

i'm going to read all your fics within 2 days!

(posting a review methos sent via email)

Like I said, Im reading your stories again (too many gaps in my memory, and its fun re-reading them). Ive just finished "Wolfram takes a break" and Ive seen the part where Wolfram turns down the offers. (I think that he meant it when he said that maybe in a hundred years hed be interested, but thats another point.)

I liked the "Chu-detector" as well as the idea of Wolfram taking a break from being a "mommy". And the mazoku beasts were interesting (Ive forgotten all but the fire foxes).

The phoenix-story - well, yes, it made me sad. Especially the end, when they die together.

"Greta is queen in Adreshulde" - talk about timelines more difficult than the dragon insurrection :)

I wanted to strangle that bird the first time he died. How mean, I'm in tears scant hours before my classes start! But I think it was suitable, to write that they did die in the end. It would have made all the experiences more shallow if the ending was untold, though now I have half a mind not to read anything else. Wolfram really does feel things so strongly, but I'm endlessly glad they were together at the end.

Just a bit upset that there HAD to be an end *sigh*

wa that is so sad! i cant imagine yuuri or wolfram dieing! wow i couldnt imagine GWENDAL hugging yuri! now i have to go wipe my eyes! great job!

when i first read the summary on your web page i thought this would be incredibly sad and i promised myself i wouldn't read it! i'm glad i broke that promise because i would of missed out; the way you portrayed Yuuri and Wolfram's love is incredible. I like your characters, they seem very right to me, maybe the anime should of ended like this. I officially want more! :P

the trouble with us fans, we dont want our heroes to age or die, no matter how slowly. we always want them to live happily ever after, young and carefree as when we are first thrust into their worlds.

i love your story, but stubborn fan that i am, i will prefer to let Yuuri and Wolfram live forever young. T_T

I found it interesting, during this, that Wolf turned into a cheater. Understandable why, but at the same time weird considering Wolf... well... XD;...

But, it was nice of the pheonix to revive him over and over, though I wonder if he went through that old man phase again as he grew.

* melts at such a good story.* that was really good. can i kidnap wolfly and yurri now?

and maou yuri as well?

i promiss to not harm then two much... :P

im glad that the phoenix did that for them though, it was sweet.

and epp/ i have to get a wriggle on and get to bed. :P

thanks for the good read,

SC

yup. i think that you have me hooked on your storyies. _ ...

first time that ive been hooked a writers work and printed out all of their stories. mind you, its good writer.

a sweet story and funny.

i love the OCs, as they6 have life to them, and there not flat or mary-sues.

i wonder what you will write about next.

and i wonder about how your aging yuuri at times, like a mazoku, half mazuko or human? personally, i think that it should be more like a half mazoku. and yea, i do agree with you that stoffle is not good. amussing, yes, but a pain in the ass. though he is good for comic relief. :P then again, i just like seeing him thrawthed in his attemptes to get close to yuri.

well, i hope that you write more when you next feel like it, and remeber - writing comes when you lest expect it, and all to often the characters hiijack the story. ( i should know, i have a novel tentivly titled the The Zodii' in the writing, and the characters have hijacked the book. * sweat drops* and its only the fifth chapter of about 30 planed.)

og yea, your strot has cheered me up, and shaken me out of my flu induced depression.

cheers.

SC

Gah! I couldn't name out my favs this time-L LURVED it all, esp the way you described things. But if I had to choose a scene that was my fav I think it was with the kitts and the kids. KAWAII X3! So, yeah, had first day of classes today. Actually sat down at the scanner and scanned ALL the pics, but either my disk wasn't saving them or the scanner wasn't working. I mean the pic showed up on screen but wouldn't save. I was SO ticked! Sorry, maybe tomorrow...if I find a DIFFERENT scanner! GR-R-R!

Oh and I made a livejournal too. Nothing there except one entry right now, but I want to upload my KKM fic on it so I can post at KKM Endlessly Faraway Sky. Check it out if you want. I put the link in The Adonis of Hotness's website.

Hope you're planning to make another fic. Hey, here's another idea for the Daddy Daycare if you ever get around to it: how bout the kiddies cut off Gwendal's long silken ponytail while he's sleeping?

Anyway, please write another fic-ANYTHING, I DON'T CARE-soon!

Lurve, Schnickledooger

::does a little dance:: Friedrich didn't die yeah! ::ponders:: change that to "yet"...

Gifts huh? Well, a few are quite obvious (even if you hadn't hinted at some of them), but some of the others... I find myself wondering about Efram's, the little devil (something to do with Greta, maybe?). And about Friedrich's, of course. hm...

Just FYI: if you stop here permanently I might be forced to maim you. Because my brain is going in circles wondering about how the characters are going to deal with inevitable upcoming events. Hahaha... This is all before the third wedding still, isn't it? Ouch... Also, was there a reason Friedrich stayed behind in the lagoon? I have a couple of ideas, but none of them seem to fit quite right... Ah, well, just another thing to occupy my time until you decide to continue, yes? ;)

Chu! Bertram is the cutest thing ever. _

The imaginery of the fire halos was lovely too.

Hmm... I see. Not so much out of character with the addition of the second chapter. Sorry about that. ::sheepish glance... again::

Anyway, I think I'll take a page out of shnickledooger's book, and tell you my favorite parts from this chapter.

“Though that’s not why we’re heading to the second island,” sighed Adelbert. “That’s for purely irrational reasons, is that right?”

“Call it what you will,” said Friedrich.- For some reason... that reminds me of Star Trek (the original one). Like an argument between Spock and Bones (maybe Kirk, because Bones' comments are a tad bit more vehement sounding most times). :D

“Chu, indeed, trickster”- so swet... and yet, so... not. it's as if it's all cuddly with an evil green eyed demon smile hidden inside XD

He turned to Friedrich. “Ah, may I… touch you, Friedrich? To compare?” -I know it wasn't meant in THAT way, but I will admit to having chuckled a bit

Efram took Yuuri’s hand in a firm handclasp. His fire passion was like unbridled joy in living, a riotously bounding curiosity.- o, that just gives me this involuntary little smile; so... pretty, for lack of a better word (::pouts:: it IS late here... My vocabulary is on strike- i'll try to subdue it as soon as possible)

Their only hope of beating them was that Conrad and Yozak, and Gwendal and Annissina, had swum out upon seeing the light shows, and were calling for a lift. Doubtless Cheri would stop to pick them up.- Or maybe... she won't? I'd most definitely laugh at that.

Thank you for the fast update and for notifying me!

Oh goodness. That was breathtaking. Your description of the island was absolutely lovely. One question- what does Bertram call Manfred, if anything at all? I must admit, I do love how quickly everyone caught on to Efram's name for Yuuri.

Also, about Friedrich. It's heartwarming that he is trying so hard with Manfred, but it seems a bit out of character? I realize they sort-of made up after (or rather during) Pheobe's disownment of Manfred and it has been a year, yet... I can't quite get myself to believe he'd change that drastically in regards to his attitude toward Manfred, especially that quickly (considering how long-lived mazoku are). Was there something I missed? I do realize he never really hated Manfred, but still... something doesn't sit right. It might not have been his relationship with Manfred, but something seemed a bit... off, with Friedrich.

ah, and that paragraph ::points:: is just supposed to be constructive criticism, if that. please don't take it the wrong way. I love your stories, and was honestly swooning so much over everything in this chapter I nearly missed that little tug on my brain ::sheepish glance::.