| Reviews for A Business Affair |
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Granatapfel chapter 1 . 11/9/2017 Draco didn't have any part in Dd's death. Albus was a dead man walking since he put his greedy paws on that creepy stone/ring. Shouldn't they be upset about RON almost dying?! |
Emmy chapter 2 . 4/29/2017 I hope you are not going to bash Ginny and make her evil for no reason and make Harry a martyr. Thats the easy way out. |
Tooru Heer chapter 43 . 4/8/2017 Amazing story~! Great read. |
Alex chapter 43 . 8/13/2016 OH MY GOD this is the best Drarry I've read ever. And let me tell you, I've read a lot of Drarry. I love how their relationship begins and how long it takes for them to realize it's more than just sex. Love love loved it! |
Murasaki Hina chapter 24 . 2/23/2016 I love the ending but Harry's personality made me cringe. He seems more submissive than he actually is. I don't mind a bottom harry but he's a bit ooc here. don't get me wrong though. I loved the story. |
InkedBaby chapter 43 . 1/26/2015 I love this entirely too much. I've spent probably a week reading it, and I'm so sad that its over. I loved your characters and plot. A lot of things were a little cliche, but there was enough twist to counter act that. Nice job with Michael by the way, never saw that coming. I think, maybe, you spent a little too much time with Ginny and not enough with Harry and Draco. There was a huge jump from sex to love and it sort of got lost in the mix. The switch from emotionless sex to I'm feeling something sort of got lost and it the new relationship came out of nowhere. I don't know that it was 100% believable. You just had a lot of character side stories going on, and while the story was long, I think maybe you just didn't even up the time dedicated to each character, so something's were very detailed while others lacked. I really wish this was even longer though, because I really did love it. And of course, id love to see more into their new relationship. Nice job though, this was a really well built story and I absolutely loved it. |
tat5934 chapter 43 . 9/4/2014 That was an great story I totally loved it even if usually I don't like post-hogwarts fanfictions! So thank you! And one more thing: I would like to apologize if my english isn't good but I'm french. So sorry if there was big mistake in my reviews! |
tat5934 chapter 41 . 9/4/2014 That's so great! And I can't believe that pansy and Michael did this together! Wow! |
tat5934 chapter 40 . 9/4/2014 Yes they will finally divorce! |
tat5934 chapter 38 . 9/4/2014 Ha ha Ron is so hilarious! Take that Ginny! |
tat5934 chapter 37 . 9/4/2014 Ron knows now! The only one left is Ginny... |
tat5934 chapter 36 . 9/4/2014 Draco is so cute... How could he deny that he loves Harry ? |
tat5934 chapter 35 . 9/4/2014 Ginny is so annoying! |
tat5934 chapter 34 . 9/4/2014 So Draco finally realised that he feels something for Harry! It was about time! |
tat5934 chapter 32 . 9/4/2014 Oh my god! |