Ohhhhhh, awesome!
But I'm sad its over though. ... :(

Not bad but you have a small problem with time.

According to the cannon, one takes 3 days to make the trip between Suna and Konoha and more 3 days to come back. Also, the extraction of a Tailed-Beast takes 3 days as well.

And finally, if this story takes place after the Shukaku extraction, that means Sasori was defeated which means that the Akatsuki base where Sakura and Sasori's battle took place was already destroyed so it shouldn't have been the same cave.

The only probably I saw with this, is that you need to go througha dn fix the grammar mistakes (a beta will work).

It was different then what i thought it would be...but it turned out okay.

your not serious are you that cannot be the end can it it was so ...so ..so borinng make it cooler please or a sequal okay i'm cryin here cause it wont go on

nuts whats gonna happen to him

Really good story.

aww! its so cute!

Wow. That was... wow...

bravo, I feel you should no that I stayed up until 4:23 in the

morning 'cause I needed to know what happened. Great job!

Ahh... See thats what every story should be like!

make a sequel. if you want to that is.

This is an AMAZING STORY! I have read all 19 chapters nonstop! I think this should be included in the magna, it fits so perfectly! I like how you included Gaara's firm resolution to save the friend who saved him. Finally, Naruto became a chuunin!

I have to admit that that was a cheesy ending.

ok... I never saw the 'darkside' of this story...but still ... it was a mice story! XD

nice ending

finally! these are rare though, dark!Naruto with a happy and a non destroyed Konoha...I like your story a lot too!