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Dude, can you believe how bloody wonderful I am? Seriously, if it were physically possible I would be making out with myself right now. But it is not, so I shall have to get a clone... or perhaps resort to incest?

Hm. Three sentences in and I'm already raving about incest. I think you are being clued into my damaged psyche more and more everyday. It's the unfortunate part about getting to know me, I suppose... the scar(r)ed brain tissue.

I'm currently listening to "It's Alright, Baby" by Komeda from the Gilmore girls soundtrack.. it always makes me happy. WOOHOO!

Woah, randomness. I'm sorry. I will try to focus the attentions of this (pre) review to the actual fic.

I think you did a wonderfabulous job is all, and if I had anything to do with it it is because you gave this baby some good seed (dirty) and sun and moist soil in which to grow. I was just some crazed gardener that came by and sang to the little sprout and did a little native american wonderdance for it. That is all. (Am I taking this gardening metaphor a little too phar?)

You really should consider writing another story, for those of us who want to escape from the exploding world of actual Gilmoreland. It's nice to have a place to go where David Bowie is adequately mentioned, and lovely kisses occur without inclusion of frivolous flaky overaged fratboys. There will never be enough copyright-infringed situations in which Luke and Lorelai romantically intervene.

I want to write another fanfic now.. I wish my muse would speak to me again. I haven't written anything in months. Hey, we should collaborate! Woot. If my muse won't have me, I might as well steal yours. And maybe even have Hanna tag along in writing, if she is feeling grounded enough to speak with us. Cough.

For a pre-review, this is a pretty good size, I think.

Loves you Jombluhs,

The Unwashed and Somewhat Slightly Dazed,

Moi.

P.S. Hypocritically, I will now ask you for some sort of review you can spare for the stories you have not reviewed yet. Oh, gosh. I'm terrible.

So.

Get that little alert I so convinced you you weren't receiving?

WOOHOO!

I AM AMAZING!

Finally I sat my butt down (well, lay down on the bed) and did it. Happy?

Enough about my greatness (WHICH incidentally I could talk about for hours). Hey, where did the cool spell check go? pOnDeReSqUe and I raved about it for weeks in our reviews. Sad. Poor Svenska. Anyway.

First off, any story that starts with idolization of David Bowie is automatically number one in my book. You know me. I totally squeed when I first read that.

"Lorelai shrugged as innocently as a woman who was trying her best not to vomit possibly could."

Haha. When I picture that, it is very awkward and makes me laugh.

Mold kills, mom. Oh Rory, lighten up. Accept the mold. Embrace the mold. Frolic in fields holding hands with the mold. It's going to be a part of your life. Get used to it.

I love how Lorelai knocked her chair over nervously at the sound of Luke, and then wondered how Rory deduced her anxiety. Oh, Lorelai. You silly thing.

I love the paint color rant. Paint colors are SO FREAKIN' RIDICULOUS. "Over two thousand shades of white? I did not know that." Haha. Cockatoo. Which college would one go to to get such a degree, anyway?

Haha. Can you imagine Luke in a cowbell? The second I mentally put it around his neck, he falls to his knees and moos and begins eating the grass which has inexplicably grown on a small section of the diner floor. I smell a new spinoff... the Adventures of the Gilmores and their Farmy Friends...

Mm, Danish-eating contest. Mm, Danishes.

"Rory wiped the corners of her mouth demurely, suddenly sporting a serious expression." I like that. How she wipes the corner of her mouth demurely. In my mind she sprouts white gloves and a tiara and then does the royal wave. The answer is yes, my imagination is way over active.

I like the "Ignoring the looks from Lorelai, which ranged from imploring to hostile." I always make faces like that at people. Like if some weird guy is dancing with me, I'd mouth desperately at my friends 'HELP HELP HELP HELP' and unless they're being nice, they usually laugh and run away. And I always stand at the door of my friend's classes and make faces.

The revelation did seem a little fast and without a lead up to it...but who am I kidding, I'm not going to criticize you. Look at that shirt. Who can diss a sausage master?

Haha...I can see a new dirty slang. "I wanna frost your flakes." HA! I still have to work on exactly what it'll mean. But it'll be dirty. Ew, I just thought of many things it could be. Man it's dirty. I did well. You helped. We are a good team.

I like the little detail of her picking the sprinkles off the donut. Doughnut. Donut. Anyway, I like your little details, it makes it more personable.

And the kiss seemed quick too..but I mean...they actually kissed. I'm not going to argue it. I will accept it. Cause duh, no one wants to argue over an LL kiss.

Wowie. What a beautiful fic. And I assumed you're not thinking of finishing it, but I do suggest it. It's definitely not closed and it'd do perfectly with more. A multi chap, even. Can ya handle it?

Loved it, love you, love Luke and Lorelai and images of Luke as a cow and Rory as a princess. Teehee.

Now I am tired. Even though it's only 9 47 here...making it..WAIT..12 47 there. YES. I caught myself. I was going to say eleven. Anyway, even though it's early, I am about dying because I was up uber late all weekend, and just cause I'm an old granny like that.

Okay. Amazing job, sweetie dahling. Now you can get off my case. A review has been...SENT.

a fellow rapist,

hanna (the womanna)

OMG i no this was for the contest or w/e but can u update soon cuz i luv it!

Continue ASAP, IMMEDIATELY! it was really really really really really really GREAT! I LOVE it A LOT!

This is a cute story and everyone seems to be in character, but I think that the kiss happened a little fast. It was sort of random I guess. But the writing is good, and overall you did a nice job. D

I hope the kiss doesnt stop with "So he did." ;).Please update asap!

uh, well i let the time of the story. your writing style is flowy and nice and easy to understand.

but, here's the thing: it's a little rushed. well, a lot rushed. i mean, while you did let us into the minds of both Luke and Lorelai, which is good..i don't know. it just seemed to quick to kiss. sort of out of the blue.

update soon,

leah

oh my god! this was the best story i have read in awhile it is so well written. you captured the character, especially lorelai, so well. it was so real. i LOVED it! amazing amazing amazing!

Especially ones that represent sugar. Tony is pro-sugar. Cereal, that is, cause his flakes are frosted. Hm, that was kind of dirty, but anyway, you are definitely not pro-sugar cereal,

that made me laugh for so long. it's so great!

So good please tell me your continuing this!

OMG. I am in love with this story... seriously, I am concidering marriying itt... would you let me? haha, jokes. Anyways, the whole time this story was so In charactor, it was awsome, everything they said, I could actually picture it on the show! Anyways... I love this!

-I would like to see... hm, I don't know, I read this chapter and liked everything you did, so I hope your creative mind works as well next chapter.

-I dont want to see them go on their first date at sniffys... It was cute at first, but now everyone is doing it... but its still %100 precent up to you..

continue!

-Meggie-

superr cute. update soon please!