You're a really great author, the only thing you need to work on is your spelling and grammar. If you ever need someone to edit I can help with.

I am the TippyToe Zombie

I like to Limbo

Often I fall on people's heads

I'm sorry, I was wondering what you did with the revised version of the first two chapters, because I really love this story and I read it often.

Still awsome. And a good ending for this. Kudos to you my friend.

C.D.

Still loving this series. Still so so loving it.

C.D.

IF this thing had smilies I would be giving you so many grins it wouldn't be funny. I love this series. Totally love it.

C.D.

That was really a mushy chapter there dude. But I don't mind I'm a mushy person. Doesn't take much to get me to tear up.

C.D.

Sweetness. Total sweetness. Finish the series dude. I want to know what'll happen next.

C.D.

WHO HO! TOTAL SWEETNESS! Two thumbs way up dude.

C.D.

Still so so awsome. AND FINISH THE SERIES DUDE! OR I'LL HAUNT YOU WITH REVIEWS!

C.D.

It's Amanda. How I know? I read it before I registered onto here. It was one of the first fics I read. Be proud of that dude. And ya get a ABA (Awsome Beyond Awsome) Award for your Pokemon fics & your Kung Fu Panda & your Naruto fics. I'll mention the ABA Awards on the others on the other fics. So everyone who'll read reviews will know about them. Kudos to you my friend.

And enjoy your Award with stary eyes.

C.D.

DUM DUM DUM! Gary now knows that Ash is alive!He is in a big-eyed stupor. Kudos to you my poke friend.

C.D.

OK the scary movie type fic REALLY begins. Kudos to you my friend.

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ASH IS ALIVE! REJOICE TO THE LORD!

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Two thumbs up dude. Two freakin thumbs up. Kudos to you my pokemaniac friend.

C.D.

Still lovin it. And if you don't finish this series I'm gonna keep giving you reviews on this series till you DO finish it.

C.D.