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DarknessAndDeath chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 I know it's been over 11 years and four months but I'm really hoping you have not lost interest in this story because I love it. I really hope one day you will continue it and if you do I promise I will review EVERY chapter of this story, even if it's 300 Chapters long, I will do. I have really been enjoying this story. I like the Lisa is stubborn and would let Jackson take her farther from the Jungle. I really love the Jackson/Lisa interactions and think you got them spot on. I like the Claire/Lisa scene. I like how Lisa knew that Jackson wasn't arrested by the US marshal. I like that Jackson told Lisa that they might be their awhile. I like that Lisa ask Jackson why he saved her life but he turn in back onto her. I like that Sawyer said that Jackson was a abusive husband. I like that Lisa told Jackson he was lying. I think Jackson should apologised to Lisa about her bruise, in his own Jackson way of course. again I love this story and seriously hoping you haven't giving up on this story. Great work. |
DarknessAndDeath chapter 5 . 12/27/2017 I love the longest of the Chapter. I can't really remember that much at all about Locke from the show but the pic does look familiar. I like that Jackson/Lisa/Sawyer scene. I like that Jackson punch Lisa because she grabbed him and I like that Lisa elbowed him in the neck. I like that Lisa was afraid for Jackson. I really like the Claire/Lisa scene as well as the Locke/Lisa scene. I like that Locke offer his help to Lisa. I like the cliffhanger you left it on. I don't think I have been this excited about a fan-fiction in a long time. I'm really excited. I love this story and I seriously hope you haven't lost interest in this story. great work. |
DarknessAndDeath chapter 4 . 12/27/2017 I like that Shannon asked about Jackson. I like that Lisa went out on a date in the flashback. I like that Lisa imagine kissing Jackson while she was kissing Josh. I like that Jackson had been staring at Lisa for hours. I like that Lisa tried to ignore him. I like that Jackson ran away once he hear Shannon talking about him. I like that Jackson had been staring at Lisa sleeping in. I like that Lisa felt Safe around Jackson. I really enjoyed the Claire/Lisa interactions/comment. I like that Jackson, once he heard the noise went straight by Lisa side. I like that Jackson ask nicely for his knife back and didn't threaten Lisa for it back. I like that Lisa woke up around 6ish and then went back to sleep. I like that Lisa got woke up by a kid who accidentally kicked Sand her her face. I love that Sawyer/Jackson got into a fight. I like that Lisa ran to try and stop Jackson from killing Sawyer. great work. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2017 I love it. I like that Lisa stole Jackson knife of him. I like the Lisa/Jackson flashback scenes. I like that Lisa said Jackson name in her sleep right when Jackson was about to kill her. I like that Jackson couldn't kill her. I like that Jackson said he quits. I like that Jackson/Lisa interactions. I like that Jackson was choking Lisa and Boone came to Lisa's rescue. I like that Sawyer was about to intervene when he saw Boone. I like the Sawyer/Jackson interactions. I like that the Boone/Lisa/Shannon scene. I'm really enjoying reading this. |
DarknessAndDeath chapter 2 . 12/27/2017 I'm really enjoying reaading this. I love the Jackson/Lisa interactions/scenes. I like that Lisa screamed for help and tried to get the Bald guy helps. I like that Jackson head butted Lisa knocking her into unconsciousness. I love that scene. I love the cliffhanger. I like that Lisa found Jackson and carried. I like that Boone help (Ian from TVD). I'm guessing the heavily pregnant lady is Claire. Claire and Charlie are my two favourites characters and I totally ship them. I like that Lisa said that Jackson owns her a life time supply of sea breezes. I like the interaction between Lisa/Boone. I wonder why Lisa's head was wet but her body not? I like that Lisa is trying to save Jackson life. well done. |
DarknessAndDeath chapter 1 . 12/27/2017 I watch Lost as young kid, My favourite Character is Charlie. But I don't remember it that well. I literally cried alot when Charlie died. I do remember that scene really well. I like the cliffhanger you left it on. I love that Lisa feel into Jackson arms. I like that Lisa has been on many flights before. I like the Cynthia/Lisa scenes. I like that Jackson followed Lisa to the toilet. well done. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/22/2013 Nice! |
Nectar-Ambrosia chapter 6 . 8/6/2012 WHAT. WHAT. This is so good, how...DARE you not update this for years? I'm warning you now, I was a measly sixth grader when you first started this story, and I've just now stumbled upon all of it, in all its unfinished, promising, siren-seductive glory. How. Is. This. Abandoned? Don't tell me you've crashed on a deserted island during an unfortunate plan flight too. Nuh-uh. Because even if you have, you need to drag your ass back to the computer and finish this. Or at least update. You're killing me here. Wow! First of all, the plot. That's what tickles my toes. So deliciously focused, fast-paced, yet restrained enough to add frustratingly perfect tension, foreshadowing, and to allow for the characters' development, feelings, and reactions. I also adore your characterizations. Did I mention how spot-on Jackson and Lisa were? Oh gosh, and their twisted little relationship. You've captured it so well, from the little flashbacks that show just how much the red eye flight affected both of them to their terse, brimming-with-sexual-tension interactions. I can't believe such a good story isn't being finished. What is it? Lack of inspiration? Aww, come on. And the pace their trust, old grudges, etc. are growing at, is just right. Not too fast, not too slow, but just right. I can't help but wonder what happens next, how Lisa will react to Jackson's next moves, etc. And I love how there's a landmine of possibilities, utterly unpredictable, but not crazily off-course either. It's logical, given these circumstances. So are you still alive? I don't even care if it's a lame, short, cowardly little next chapter. But OMIGAHH something has to happen next, I mean right?! You can't just stop HERE. I graduate in May, soooo...you think you could have something before then? Please? Graduation present? *desperate sobs* What is this "social life" or "responsibilities" you speak of? This...great story...beckons... |
LadyElena17 chapter 6 . 9/18/2011 love this story so far! hoping to read more to it! |
ScarletSometimes chapter 6 . 8/14/2011 This really works as a plot. Now that Lost is over maybe you'll finish this story? There is so much you can do with it. |
flammarionn chapter 6 . 1/13/2011 What a fantastic concept! I hope you do decide to continue with this story some day. :) |
RedheadObsession chapter 6 . 1/12/2011 Love it! |
Jiggysaw chapter 6 . 8/9/2010 Red Eye and Lost, two of my favorite things! This crossover is brilliant. I love you for writing it. I also love Lisa's and Jackson's flashbacks! They're perfect, just like in Lost! |
azab chapter 6 . 10/31/2008 love it |
azab chapter 2 . 10/31/2008 i love it |