This is a wonderful story. I'd read it so many times, I couldn't remember whether I'd ever told you how much I liked it. I love the emotion, the ambiguity, the realness of it. Keep up the good work!

aw, that was good.

wish you would continue.

wow..

awesome.

loved the twist.

a good insight into Pyro.

great job. XD

Nice that you used some one other than Rouge for this. Well written too.

crappy? hardly.

I really like this, mostly because you took something that was done before, and made it fresh.

Brilliant twist at the end, and a perfect angsty one-shot.

Well done :)

I loved it...nice twist at the end...

Great story, I really enjoyed your writing.

Cool.

That was really good...I liked it a lot, but it was so sad that it wasn't really Kitty! Aw poor Pyro...Great job! Keep up the great work!