This is my favorite Xaiolin pairing

Please update

Half-way through this chapter, I started imagining all of the text being read in the voice of a particularly annoying valley girl accent.
It made the make-out scene extremely amusing.
"Like, ohmigod, Jack is suuuuuuch a good kisser!" HAHA

I have a pretty good idea of what's gonna happen.

You have the best ending

that was awesome and funny youur story gave me joy and tickle

i have to say i normally like jack x raimundo but you have done so well so far that im interested in this new paring good job reeling me in and that's not easy to do :D

Oh man, that was pretty frickin' hilarious. OH HEY GUYEZ JUST MAKIN' OUT NO BIGGIE

This is absolutely beautiful. I love Clay's characterization; stunning. 3

This was awesome. I enjoyed it greatly.

Denile is not just a river in Egypt, Clay

Love YAY! clay's about to go into complete denile i just know it.

OMG! That was so awesome. I just can't wait for the next chapter! Hhh its gonna be too good.

Love the ending!

I wish there was a sequal/companion fic. :)

I love you for writing this.

...

I'm serious, I could marry you right now. Clack is my otp and I've only seen like 15 fics of it and that makes me sad considering the show was made 'way back when' aka like 2002/3/4/sometime. I dunno. First episode I saw an was on youtube. So I dunno. Uhmmm... I ran out of thing to say.

"Uhmm..."

very nice!

the last part was very funny to me!