Aww this was good. Hope the rewrite is as good

Hahaha sorry I thought you were my alarm clock? God damn hilarious

I feel the need to point out that while Akuma can translate as either devil or demon Oni is actually a type of demon or youkai with ogre or troll like features so it’s more of a species than a race

Damn was a good story. Hope to see more sometime soon

You're means you are
I saw it quite often in you fic and alltjough its not my place to say
Som of those you should repleace with "your" for example , you wrote "you're turn, sasuke"
Which would mean "you are turn, sasuke"
You see what i mean?

"NOT A DUST BUNNY!" Fucking almost killed me. I was eating Chex cereal and I read that and it caught me so off guard... I broke out into a fit of uncontrollable laughter. Oh man, I hurt myself laughing so hard, and I was crying and *shakes head* I couldn't even think about it without giggling for like five minutes after I stopped laughing. Now it is to the point I'm only smiling like a lunatic, still want to lmfao though. Anyway...I'm going back to finish the story. I just couldn't continue reading without saying anyway. Thank for that. Thank you so much.

This story is AWESOME! I can't wait for the rewrite! And you're AWESOME too!

how can it be the first time if this is your only story?

WHAAATT!? I read all of that and stayed up late to see this? Geez, and it was getting REAL GOOD.

great story can't wait for the rewright.

ameterasu burn even other flames so burn your dragons stomach its angry again

brown flames now your dragon will attack you if you feed the flames to it remember what happened when natsu ate them

Well it was fun reading this but I do wish that you would of put discontined or something in the summary. Aside from that the fic though incomplete was great and I loved it especially Lunchimaru

I would like to inform you that this story is very good and I would like it if you continued it. ;]

How come Sakura only got cats as her summoning and Sasuke got dragons?