I don't understand the shampoo bit but otherwise this was an AMAZING story. x3

enticing...

WTF! lol very good story. You should update it. I can see this being even more hilarious, and nice job making it seem awkward for Ichigo too. It really is a mystery! XD

Haha, lol!

The ending gives me a distinct feeling that Ichigo won't remember a damn thing in the morning, and that he'll end up in that position again. XD

Bloody brilliant, I could imagine Ol' hat 'n sandals doing something like this!

Holy shit! this was good, I hope you keep up writing like this cause it was awesome and it would be kinda sad if you stopped.

I like fics like these since they have more depth and well mysteries XD

anyway thank you for writing this I had something really pleasant to read this early in the morning *hug*

This is something really wonderful! Something I couldn't expect.. This is like a book. You describe things so lively, you have many details in this fic. You use metaphors which tell me that you really are a good writer! So please! Write more fics like this.

I love this fic.

Great story. I've read it so many times. I really like it!:)

... Wow, that's really good!

Yummy! that was sweet and yummy for us yaoi fangirls! SQUEAL! .

Probably one of thd best (if not the best) sex scenes I've ever read. Thanks so much for writing this.

This was a yaoi that was better planned out then most I have read. Other then some where it seems they spent as much time writting as they did thinking, which would apear to be very little. I would be hard pressed to find grammatical errors. Along with no annoying wall of text, you use the quotations I love to see in a story, so I didn't have to guess at when someone was talking, thinking, or a narration going on. Which is what annoys me most. Good story over all, it seems very Bleach like with the characters. So its good you kept their personalities, 10/10 for you. Many kudos.

Le meow~! Aya loves this one so much more than the other ones with Ichigo and Urahara put together!

Urahara is my favourite character and this is my favourite pairing! But enough about me, it's you who's a frickin writing genius. Your writing style is so poetic. I wouldn't mind at all if you continued this amazing piece. Please?

Lovely story :)

Damn that was arousing... Shiznit, I'm a bad person for liking this stuff... TT

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I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!