I've always loved the restoration of Peter and Edmund's relationship. Probably my favorite scene of TLTW&TW movie. Beautifully written! :)

I love how Edmund explained Aslan leaving to Lucy. Beautiful chapter! Wonderful reconciliation of the brothers. 3 :)

I read this story a long time ago, but I hadn't realized that it was updated. Wonderful new chapter. I absolutely love brotherly fluff between Peter and Edmund.

That was awesome! I loved the way you wrote the characters, especially Edmund and Peter!

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I think this story is pretty good written, but you have to stop pointing that Peter feels unsure.. Let it flow, don't turn back on.. Anyway, very nice written :) thanks for sharing..

Oh my gosh! Loved it! I am so pleased witb yiur story it is very well written and I look forward to your updates

That's really nice!

"Peter hadn't been quite the same since they'd come home six months ago. He was more self conscious and wasn't able to adjust to being a teenager again. Peter was fragile, and it was Edmund's responsibility to protect him now." Oh PETER! I hope he's going to be okay! Edmund is such a good younger brother - Peter has always taken care of him - now it's his turn to look after Peter. But these nightmares - poor Eddie! I wish he could finally be free from his demons.

I thought the previous chapter was a good ending for this story. But now that I've read the true ending, I like how you show the brothers adjusting to civilian life, so to speak, and how they still support each other in all matters. I'll be looking out for the sequel! :)

Great ed's speech

This was rreally sad

fantastic! cant wait to read both the epilogue and sequal. ed is my fav character and i ver much enjoyed this story and his point of view. i think you portrayed him very well. thank you so much for writing this and sharing it here. cant wait to read more. in the meantime i wish you good luck and no writers block in this and all of your future writings. good luck!

Interesting twist. I'm glad they did eventually manage to reconcile.

I really liked this story. And if I may? Instead of doing one on Caspian (which I'm sure would be great) could you do one with the inbetween like when they're the rulers?