If Tamaki was a brighter man, he would've filed for spousal abuse years ago. I LOVED THIS LINE.

This chapter was fun to read! :D

aah,, and now i must look at your LJ. ;)

it has been years since you've written... i hope your writing took you somewhere good. you have a gift. :)

Absolutely beautiful .. it was just so lovely. There isn't a lot of Tamaki and Haruhi love around here but I'm glad I found this story because it explains their 'love story' so well. Loved it!

Again, very lovely. I know quite some time has passed, butI do hope you'll finish at some point. I love this pair, and they would be very easy to mess up, but you've done a wonderful job. Thank you.

I really enjoyed this chapter. I wouldn't call the end sad exactly, but bittersweet...I don't know, heartwarming perhaps. It gave me hope for a happy ending anyways.

Ah, I enjoyed this very, very much! Wonderful work!

So I can't carry you across the threshold?

-snortlaughgiggleroll-

That was hilarious. Seriously.

This is a cute thing you have going on here, and I'm an avid Tamaharu fan, hence the icon of choice at the moment and just flat-out adorableness that is the two of them together.

You're write very well! I'm enjoying this!

-Aer

Wonderful! All of them were good, but this was my favorite of the three, for the attempt and honest reflection it presents.

I just have one complaint: for a snogging challenge, there's no snogging! Not even one bit. You should write one more just so you can have a proper snog.

" Everyone knew the women in relationships called all the shots."

*bwahahaha* Aint that the truth in this here case! XD

And i must agree. There is a surpring lack of Tamaki/Haruhi fics and not just on After searchin as hard as i could, ive only managed to find almost a 100 fics that i really liked. *pouts* and only like 5 smut fics...curses. I did so want to have a few good TamaHaru smut ficlets with me...

*sighs*

But you keep up the great work! :D

That was so sweet! :

She concluded, while memorizing each individual thread on his shirt, that the only thing more golden than Tamaki's hair was, in fact, his heart - and while neither were, most assuredly, superficial, the latter was the purer of the two.

That was my favorite part! That was so beautiful I don't have words to express it!

Ohmygawd, this series is so incredibly cute! You portray the characters perfectly! And I loved the first chapter a lot, too...especially how you managed to involve blood and Tamaki together in a CUTE way. (Usually it would be kind of grotesque in a light-hearted series like Ouran, but you pulled it off perfectly)

So KUDOS. UPDATE. (Although it's unlikely after so much time has passed. I just loved your writing too much!)

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This is such a beautiful story! This is one of the few good tamaharu's that I've read. I absolutely love this story! I feel like you have captured the characters beautifully. I also like the different metaphors that you used. Many people don't realize how many metaphors there are in Ouran Host Club.

Again, beautiful story.

I will be watching this one for updates.(I'm also secretly hoping that maybe you'll have more stories like this.)

-CrescentMoony

aw, uts so god i love tamaki with haruhi!please hurry and update! ek! they should totally kiss in the next chapter!even if they accedentily fall on each other...actually that would be funnier! sry im totally insane, but please huirry and update!

This is extremely well-written. Wonderful choice of words. Descriptive. Beautiful imagery and metaphors. Cohesive. Accurate characterization (I greatly appreciate this). I honestly can't seem to criticize it. It's a shame there aren't a lot of TamaHaru fics like this.

I love your writing. I think your characterizations are beyond perfection. The little details that you add, however unecessary some may believe it to be seeing that it adds length to a story, makes it all the more powerful to read. I enjoy that fact that you write mainly based on solid detail rather than dialogue because I think it expresses the character's nature in a more precise manner.

A lot of authors bore me with their details but you've immersed me in your writing and I can't get enough. Beautifully written and flawless structure. I commend you.