This wasn't a great fanfiction. It had many issues especially with continuity but once I started reading I couldn't stop. Glad I read it until the end it, not perfect but defiantly an enjoyable read!

OMG! The joke with Brock was awesome! I almost burst my stomach laughing! Keep up with the good 'work'!

You spelled the mom's name wrong I know from the anime and it's MY NAME :* It CAROLINE C-A-R-O-L-I-N-E. F*UCK YOU!

OMG THAT GIRL IS SUCH A PLASTIC! And Drew? She's manipulating him! Why didnt may just slap him and beat him up? I was glad they broke up.

Why don't May and Drew just get married? It would make way more sense, since they have the baby.

I feel like Matsumoto is a better last name than Maple.
Ashiro is a better last name than Almond.

Hey may and drew can be in a relationship, nobody cares, amourshipping it's the best

Now you're somebody that used to know, somebody I used to know, somebody that used to know, it's a song :p

It must have been nearly 10 years ago that I started reading this, but never finishing it. It's a great story, but I was upset about how May got back together with Drew in the end. I've never liked his character; he reminds me too much of someone I used to know.

Once upon a time, minus the pregnant part, I was Ash. I watched the girl I really liked be cheated on and abused in a relationship. When she broke up with him after finding out the truths, I was there for her. She wanted to go back. She was positive that he changed and all of his cries to get her back had made in impact on her. He didn't change. I hated that guy. Even though I was there for her, he still got her in the end. He didn't treat her as bad, but he is still a Drew. Even though it was 3 years ago, and I was 16 then, it still breaks my heart.

I wish that she didn't go back to him. There are so many great girls that keep doing that. They think those guys change, but I know deep in my heart that it will never happen. Those guys in the world like me, the nice ones, the Ash's, we will forever watch our May walk away.

You got hole wrong too,and that's 3 words wrong.

The cuteness levels are over 9000

I like the story! Very funny! Needs more rape though...

wow realy love it.
you are a grate writter .

Tres bien! Very good story!

Wow. Your really good! You actually made me cry in this chapter. (Not that it's not hard to make me cry.) I'm looking forwards to all of your next stories.