Reviews for A Breath in the Dark
Guest chapter 4 . 7/26/2016
If a story is repeating itself in one chapter, then it's a bad story. That's the worst story ever,!
Neko Chibi Naru chapter 11 . 9/10/2014
OMG I LOVED THIS! Its so sad yet so omg i dont even ... I just lo vei t so much!
xxjulietphantomhivexx chapter 11 . 7/8/2014
I loved this SO much! I never comment on anything and I in fact made my account in order to tell you this. I really want and need to know what happens! Please finish this!
Guest chapter 11 . 3/31/2014
Love it can't wait for act ii
Guest chapter 11 . 3/5/2014
This is the best I have ever read.i love it
mallie chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
Wow! Just came across this yesterday and wow! I love the way you got into the heads of all the characters and not just one or two. The haunted house chapter was especially clever, not using the perspective of any of the main characters for the most part of the story. Wow! Loved it, but where is act two? I feel like Gaara and Naruto right now, abandoned. You can't leave them, or me for that matter, like this. It sounded like you had clear direction for the second act when you said you were splitting the story so, where is it? ): Good luck in your writing. You are awesome. And please get an act two up here!
eorlovesu9 chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
I love your stories thanks so much making them :p
DylanClark chapter 11 . 6/7/2012
I lovee itttt! Where is act 2 thoooooooo?
Ichigan chapter 11 . 11/30/2011
D: this was utterly heart-wrenching. I just... ): so where is Act II?
Ichigan chapter 9 . 11/30/2011
I cannot believe what Sasuke did. I was laughing and embarrassed for him the whole time. So tell me, did he enjoy it or not? Hahahaha.
Ichigan chapter 8 . 11/29/2011
Sigh. Orochimaru will always be there to ruin anything good, won't he? Anyways I thought Neji was a little too violent with Sai, usually he's the type to... Well, do things subtly, instead of the in-your-face type right? I don't think he should've been so violent there.
Ichigan chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
I loved this chapter! It seemed a little bit awkward for me though, like how Gaara ignored Neji's weird behavior and he didn't get mad or anything when he was kissed by a dude. I mean, normally people would not be very happy, right? Or maybe it's just Gaara's lack of social tact here. Although, I think they moved too fast with the Gaara telling Neji about his background... It takes time, doesn't it?

Anyways, I really liked this chapter :) Shikamaru was cool and Kiba was cute. Hinata was cute too! And really, why was Sasuke wearing pink underwear...? Major cuteness hahaha. Loved the NejiGaara moments.
Biennia Baron chapter 11 . 10/11/2010
HOW CAN THIS BE COMPLETE? You cant end it with the word shattered! This is a crime!
Shokubenii chapter 5 . 9/20/2010
...how do you burn SOUP?
ComplicitTuba chapter 11 . 5/31/2010
THIS WAS SO AWESOME! I'm so sorry I didn't review untill now! But, I will on part two! I can not wait to read it! Is Gaara really going to be insane, will Neji save him from the insanity he may (or may not)be dealling with! Will Sasuke return to Naruto? OR will Naruto and Gaara just make their own happy ending? I can't wait!
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