Very cute, and if only Lorelai had been a little more willing to give Jess a chance. I like this change from the dance marathon, and the peek into young Jess and Rory.

nicely done

This was so perfect! I absolutely loved it. Great job!

Red

if only that had happened ahhh...

I LOVE THIS FIC!

And that's all I'm gonna say about that.

liked it.

I LOVE IT Great work!1

Aww I'd copy-pasted the bits I really liked and accidentally deleted them! :( Point I was trying to make was how wonderfully you've captured the characters! The one-legged dancing banter with Luke/Lorelai and the face-sucking Shane comment by Rory were two of the best ones. I especially think you've got Lorelai's character down well.

This is definitely a better version than the episode! I understand why Dean was mad in the original, but this was just so much better! And Jess? *swoons* Nuff said I think. I love how you got Paris, Lane and Kirk in as well. It made it seem more like a real episode than a FanFic.

Excellent job on this! :)

OMG! I love this with a burning, fiery passion. Amazing!

ooh. that's so good! i don't even hate u for writing a oneshot cuz it's so long! jk. ayway, i really iked this! so good!

Hey! I really loved this story. I don't usually like one shots because they tend to be kinda pointless, but i loves this one. The way Rory and Jess got together was probably one of the best ive read

i'm so freakin amazed that my facial expression hasnt changed for like 5 minutes. yay! i loved it!

LOVE IT

So, i pretty much never read One-shots, but I decided to try this one. I absolutely loved it. It was extremely well-written and felt like I was watching the show, not reading a fan-fic. I especially like how you wrote Lorelai towards the end.

All in all, the story wasn't over the top in any way. Just perfect.

absolutely loved! i think i read it on an rj site before i read it here...hmm. oh well, incredible no matter how many times you read it!