I'm so glad Bella finally remembered Jacob. It bothered me when she didn't.

So dedward was worth her abondoning her own fam ily to leave her father in agony over the loss of his daughter. Jake being bighearted enough to care for him and Bella deluded fool that she is thinks that her poison, useless existance was worth it. Bella is of course in your crap her typical sick, twisted, souless self. I wonder why you capture Bellas deep selfishness, ability to only care about herself, that deep sickness in her heart so well. It says something about the author of thiese stories. Of course she needs edward here, she has destroyed everyone else in her quest for her shallow needs.

Yep NOT ONE DECENT STORY. Anybody who thinks throwing away everything to do with life and friendship to be with a reanimated corpse is not in love. they are a coward so afraid of living life on its own terms so afraid of the risk that living life is. the risk of loss and pain. that they are incapable of knowing what love is. Thast what Bella was - incapable of seeing past her own fears and insecuries. Dedward represented the sure thing. Jacob represented all she feared. So in a way Dedwatd would be worth it for a person as shallow and selfish as Bella. He would never change, he wasnt able to and he woulkd obsess on the inability to change focus on it. After all the sparkles dont live and they dont love the exist and they posses. Amazing though all of your fic is the same. Like your trying to convince yourself that Bella wound up with a perfect..whatever, when it sounds like hell.

Closure for them both. Nicely told.

I never liked Jacob, he was too selfish. I am glad he got over it.

UhhGG Im going to puke. I just dont think it would happen like this. But then again it is Bella.
So, Bella is compelled by forces unknown to comes back and tell jacob being a sparklepire is just swell and it was worth every life she ruined, and every shred of agony and pain she caused and the river of tera that were shed for her. It was worth giving up warmth, family, children, friends and a deep soul-southing love from a man who wanted her to give up nothing, to be nothing but herself. A love most people would kill for - all for Edwards sick, twisted poisonous, obsessive, infatuation and a forever fresh look. Then just so nobody forgets EXACTLY who and what they are dealing with (to make her fuck you complete) -Bella just has to twist the blade on Jakey one last time for old times sake. You know - to keep the agony fresh and shiny bright. Whoever wrote this is fucked in the head.

Beautiful, it made me cry!

Sooo good!

2 thumbs up! :) very nice.

so wonderful!

ugh! i really hate bella shes such a selfish person she doesnt deserve jacob as a friend

WOW...JUST WOW..lol

Brilliantly written! That was such a sweet story! A little sad but SO sweet! Keep writing stories like that! theyre amazing!

That was so good but so depressing... he's aging, and she is still 19 and beautiful...

Bella's kind of selfish.

Jacobs really nice.

And this story is pretty excellent :)

FUCK YOU