Feels like were going round in circles. Like the concept of this story and thought it started really well but vegeta is very petulant and being obtuse.
Also bulma asked supreme kai to give the photos if the king asked for them... then he just rushes in and gives them to him, rather rude of him and at odds with him being cautious not to make vegeta mad., then an odd little break to go tell bulma, which was unessisary.

Im being a tad negative... you managed to keep my attention for 8 chapters but as I started this review I feel like its going round in circles. And vegeta is being far to insulting for my liking, I get there would be anger but I doubt vegetas honour would let him disrespect his father so openly... maybe some cutting remarks.

Anyway these are just some of my opinions. I really was enjoying it just was getting frustrated at lack of progression.

please update soon or else your soul is mine...ha ha ha just kidding but please update ...

Love this story, I hope to Super Kami Guro that you update soon. I just love this plot, and both Vegeta's interactions.

Hahaha! King Vegeta is smart! :)

I like this story really much!but theres one thing that bothers me is where the FUCK is Tarble?

I wish a lot more fics were written this way! I truly adored this! And after I read this I had this whole obsession with needing to see my beloved characters having a one on one with their fallen kin, especially their fathers! i'm so happy I found this again and was able to favorite! It was beyond amazing and I loved it!

Well that was rather abrupt!

This is a really good story!

This is an amazing story! They have many like this with Goku meeting Bardock, so I looked for one with Vegeta and Vegeta Sr. and I have to say I am not the least disappointed. Even though people are begging for more I don't really think you need more. I mean all the problems of the story are fixed so, what's the point? Anyway that's up to you. Thank you, for writing such a great story!

i love the whole story just add 1 or 2 more chappies please lpease please

I have read every single chapter you've written in the story so far and I am enjoying them every time I read them. I also hope you keep on going and add the next chapter.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY I'm soooooo glad that you started posting chapters again XD I'm glad that Vegeta and his dad are finally kind of sort of getting along now

My fav chapter! I read it over and over. And loved it so much. It's so rare to read a story that feels so believable. Thank you so much for the wonderful read. 3

Love this story. It's rare to read something that felt in character.

I have this story in my favorates plus I realy realy love it that I want more pages done so we can find out what happens at the end.